Title : That Which Remains
Author : jedinemo
Rating and disclaimer : Rated PG-13. The Star Wars Universe belongs to George Lucas and Lucasfilm Ltd, and I have gained nothing but satisfaction from this fanfic.
Summary : A sequel to
Come With Me. It's been two years since Vader destroyed Palpatine at Endor and helped the Alliance reforge the
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For someone who claims they don't like writing about politics, you have some very intriguing bits of it in this chapter. So, senators are plotting against Anakin, and Mon at least knows about it. An underhanded scheme against her father, might be what it takes to make Leia fully accept him. If Luke can keep him alive. I wonder if poor Luke has anything approaching a private life, or if his father has simply taken over his life. Wheels within wheels. Want a new chapter very soon.
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And as for politics, this is the story that kept presenting itself. I tried to stuff it away, but in the end, I had to accept that this is the scenario I find most realistic.
And Luke will continue to have his hands full, and he's finding it's getting a little old.
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Yes, as mlgm said, it's got quite the political slant. The good news/bad news about that is that to find inspiration, all I have to do is look in the paper:)
And you're right, Luke may have gotten more than he bargained for in Anakin, but he can handle it.
I'll be looking for your new icon, and the next chapter of DG (hint, hint).
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Terrific beginning! My favorite section (of course!) was the Luke-and-Vader interaction in the middle. The "were you using your nice voice?" line made me smile. Was that an intentional nod to the end of "Come With Me?"
Looking forward to the next chapter!
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I was not that clever, but now that you say that, it does work well.
My favorite section (of course!) was the Luke-and-Vader interaction
Then you'll really like the next chapter!
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