Comments | jedinemo: [FIC] That Which Remains 6/? (SW AU, Vader, Luke, Leia PG-13)

jedinemo

[FIC] That Which Remains 6/? (SW AU, Vader, Luke, Leia PG-13)

Jun 06, 2007 23:20

Title : That Which Remains

Author : jedinemo

Rating and disclaimer : Rated PG-13. The Star Wars Universe belongs to George Lucas and Lucasfilm Ltd, and I have gained nothing but satisfaction from this fanfic.

Summary : A sequel to Come With Me. It's been two years since Vader destroyed Palpatine at Endor and helped the Alliance reforge the ( Read more... )

Comments 17

tartanshell June 7 2007, 07:04:10 UTC

Ohhh. I really adore you, you know that? And I absolutely love this fic. (Er, and I just realized that I owe you a comment on the last chapter, too. Oops.)

So awesome. I love that Anakin has gone home. I'm really liking the Leia storyline, too--I hope she will decide to go talk with the one person who could answer all of her questions. And I love Luke using the pod as his sanctuary.

Great job, as usual. :)

jedinemo June 8 2007, 14:12:45 UTC

Yes, nothing like putting a little darthvader101 to use :) Actually I had this sectioned outlined for awhile, and I knew it would touch on a lot of suit issues.

Glad you like it!

effet_de June 7 2007, 07:32:41 UTC

When I saw this, I made a sound. It was a weird sound, somewhere between a squeak and a really loud squeal. My cat freaked out and ran away :-\

Excellent as usual. You've got me very curious about where the story is going ;)

jedinemo June 8 2007, 14:14:18 UTC

Thanks! I hope the cat has recovered ;)

ring34_ani June 7 2007, 09:05:05 UTC

Well, I get up in the middle of the night cause I've got a nasty cold and can't sleep...now I find this nice little treat that went a long way towards making me feel better.

I like the thought of Luke using the meditation pod almost as much as Anakin being back on Tatooine and in Kenobi's home! Your detailing in describing Anakin's repairs of Kenobi's disastrous mechanical system was amazing. As was his attempts to figure out comfortable sleeping accomadations.

And I have to admit that sometimes I skip through Leia and her political dealings in stories but not in this one. I do dread her finding out the circumstances surrounding Padme's death and hope it doesn't jeopardize her newly found feelings for her father.

As always, I eagerly await the next installment!

jedinemo June 8 2007, 14:19:53 UTC

I like the thought of Luke using the meditation pod almost as much as Anakin being back on Tatooine and in Kenobi's home!

Yeah, what is that old saying, walk a kilometer in their boots, or something like that...

I do dread her finding out the circumstances surrounding Padme's death

The interesting thing is, none of the principal characters know what happened.

mlgm June 7 2007, 12:11:05 UTC

Ahh, they miss each other. If for no other reason, only another Skywalker can understand how they perceive the world. And as hard as they try to make separate lives, all three of them: Luke, Anakin, and even Leia are just too different from everyone else to be happy apart from the only other people who can understand.

Luke needs to finish this mission, pick up Leia, and go find Dad and start building that new Jedi temple.

jedinemo June 8 2007, 14:23:15 UTC

I'm taking it that the whole "it's the journey, not the destination" thing is not working for you :)

"I say patience"...

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jedinemo June 8 2007, 14:29:47 UTC

I see him tweaking and modifying his life-support systems over time, now that he no longer has the Empire/Republic to rely on

Yeah, through the hyberbaric chambers and other support, he's been able to soften the impact of the suit somewhat. But being out in the wilderness, he's relearning what a total pain in the ass it is.

I like the image of Luke in the big chair; it was an idea that grew and grew.