Brigit's Flame September Week Two

[jellybeanchichi]

Eternal moments
by JellybeanChiChi

The following is my entry for Brigit's Flame September Week Two. The prompt was eternal. Thanks to Ruth and Margaret for Beta work.

Comments

[cedarwolfsinger]

Eternal moments indeed... Chills down the spine, dear... WOW. I'm really glad the little baby did not drown... (Thank you!)

[jellybeanchichi]

I'm glad too.
Thanks for reading and for the comments. I wasn't sure if poeple would want to read anything like this.
Thanks again.

[mermaidbia]

Brilliant.
You manage to capture the moments that make up a life, that make a life special in the mental photo album of memory, and you do it with such short, precise strokes.
Gorgeous.

[jellybeanchichi]

Thanks so much. I appreciate you coming to read.
Thanks again.

[insolentscrawl]

I really love what you did with this story... the journey through a life and all that weave in and out, including our ultimate regrets. Well done.

[jellybeanchichi]

You're too kind.

[fiercebydesign]

Very well done! It seemed a little choppy at first, but there was definitely a fluidity to it. It seemed to fit together like a puzzle.

[jellybeanchichi]

Thanks so much. I appreciate you stopping by to read and review.

[fiercebydesign]

Well, I needed to see who to vote for... wanted to make sure I made good choices.
I think I have with this one. :)

[grayglube]

This was such a great patchwork of one woman's life and I enjoyed it all, there was a little bit of everything in here and it made for an effortless collage. Great job!

[jellybeanchichi]

I was going for a patchwork effect, so I'm pleased you said that. Thanks so much for stopping by and reviewing.

[grayglube]

you're very welcome hun