Safeguarding Altruism

Apr 28, 2009 20:37

Title: Safeguarding Altruism
Pairing: GRI
Author: jemnise
Summary: TWO ONE SIDED. Get it? Because they are fools. And because there are no happy endings in real life.
AN: Okay. so yea. I saw the prompt in gdheartri and was like, I WANT TO WRITE! LOL XD First, because *slapsself* there gabajillion of GRI nowadays. Second, because TODAE is killing me. ( Read more... )

p: gdragon/seungri, author: j

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parkchoongjae April 28 2009, 13:33:39 UTC
SHIT.

^that was my reaction when I realized that it was TOP who hurt Seungri and not Jiyong. LOL. XD

this was beautifully written. Nadala ako sa story. Grabe. Ang bigat sa puso pare. Pero ang ganda. I love the irony and complications of the superheroes theme. GAAH, as much as I'd like to think that this ended happily, I think it didn't. But surprisingly, i'm quite okay with it.

I love how you wrote Jiyong's feelings for Seungri. It's simple and complicated at the same time. Naramdaman ko ang lungkot at saya ni Jiyong. Alam mo yun, he's willing to do anything for Seungri, just to see him happy, make him happy. Kahit na masaktan siya, ok lang. Basta masaya si Seungri.

Grabe. Ang galing nito. Amazing. :D

Isa pa pala.

"I am moving on Hyun. I am moving on. I am trying. Don't do this" were the words he uttered as he hung up, looked at where you are and just went inside in a blink of an eye.^screams TORI man. I know you cannot help but put this with all the TORI love around lately. And I cannot help but love it. Shucks. Napamura ako ( ... )

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maomao4ever April 28 2009, 14:00:38 UTC
omg u ninja!
i thought i saved the first spot XD
lol

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jemnise April 28 2009, 15:04:23 UTC
EHE. KALA MO SI GD NO? MWAHAHAHA XD

this is like the thing I've been experimenting on. Leaving an open ended story. Well for this, naglaro ako sa dalawang POV eh. So practically, kung titingnan mo, ang stupid nilang dalawa. LOL :) oh and I should put.

Endings are for those who died already, but even in death we all continue with our journey.

True love never ends, it pauses, but it never ends.

LMAO. random me. MWAHAA XD

*bows and waves* salamat. salamat. natouch ako. *wipes tears away* kung ganito ang mga resulta ng pagiging emo, magemo na lang ako for life ROFLMAO XD

AHAHAHAHAHAHAHA *hugs ate meg*

o sya. maipost na gdheartri ng mabato at makutya ng GRI. taenang buhay to oh O-O

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maomao4ever April 28 2009, 13:50:36 UTC
holy shit
SPOT <3

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maomao4ever April 28 2009, 14:08:19 UTC

OK FIRST OF ALL, THIS DID NOT SUCK
NOT.AT.ALL.
IN FACT, ITS.FUCKING.AMAZING.
U STUPID LIAR! XD

Because they are fools. And because there are no happy endings in real life.
why so emo???
think about rainbows?candies?and happy thoughts?
FUCK THAT...cuz im pretty emo myself
so yay emo power -_- (totally off topic i know)
AND AMEN TO THAT

A couple of years and three months, he figured out that you weren't meant to be. He figured that he wants a family. That he wants a wife, not a fuck buddy. He wants a stable life, he wants a normal one.
FUCK YOU CHOI SEUNGHYUN FUCK YOU.
u have killed top-ri for me...AGAIN XD

I'm the damsel in distress, he saved me.
i totally LOLed in my office...........i hope my manager is not around
but ri = damsel in distress...muhahahahaha

No you never saw him transform, you never saw him put on a cape or a mask, you never saw him puts on a lousy, balls scratching spiderman suit, or some lame batman mask.
why.so.awesome.
totally made my day =D

"I promised myself, if given a chance, I will save you over and over ( ... )

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jemnise April 28 2009, 15:22:00 UTC
*brings out the CROSS!*

FORGIVE ME?

LOL XD OMFG. ME quoted! *flails*

HAHAHA EMO POWER!!! WUHOOO XD but whatev, I mean its an honest truth anyways. -____-
OOPSIES. O-O but yea, i killed them. I have been killing them for some time now demmit. O-O *runs off*
BLAME RI IN A TUTU! :)

GOSH GOSH GOSH GOSH.

WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH. MY GTOP HEART.

YEHSUNG? YEHSUNG? SAVE ME! They are hijacking our ship!!!! -___________-

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maomao4ever April 28 2009, 15:35:30 UTC
*destroys ur ship*
MUHAHAHAHAHAHA.

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eyzel April 28 2009, 15:48:05 UTC
SHIT.

^that was my reaction when I realized that it was TOP who hurt Seungri and not Jiyong. LOL. XD

FTW. Ganyan din initial reaction ko nun. Shet. Ang galing nun, kung diversion man talaga yun at sinadya. XD

OMO, neng. Ipasok mo itong entry na ito. I swear. At wag ka na emo...mabigat nga sa damdamin, sabi ni ate Meg XD

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jemnise April 29 2009, 10:27:48 UTC
HAHAHAHA. sorry naman T________________T

pero. pero. ewan. ganun talaga yung gusto kong mangyari, bleeding tori, maybe happy ending gri. MAYBE XD

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crimeis April 28 2009, 19:13:11 UTC
ajklajklajklajklajkl; cries. that was so so damn beautiful and brilliant and just hurts really good. ♥

-- & my favorites all in one piece. topri & gri. :)) your diction never ceased to amaze me. wonderful as always dear.

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jemnise April 29 2009, 10:28:55 UTC
oooh thanks dear! its been ages, i think, since i've written gri O-O so yea. T___________T

thanks thanks thanks!

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vlpdnsu68 April 29 2009, 01:18:54 UTC
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holy cheeznits. T.T
happy endings do exist after all :]
beautifuuuuuuuuuuul <3 luved it xD

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jemnise April 29 2009, 10:30:09 UTC
oh i did understand that!

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ehe. thanksies! OMFG. OMFG. are you thinking what I was thinking for this fic? Because if you are *HUGS* LOL XD

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