Pride - Part Twenty Eight

[jenexell]

Comments

[jackieville]

Poor Orli *cuddles him* I love how Viggo knew exactly what to do to get his boy to smile! *g*

*cuddles frustrated girl*

[jenexell]

*cuddles back*

Viggo was just himself... which is exactly what Orlando needs!

Thanks for the comment hun! *huggles*

[weepingnaiad]

Oh, this was an incredible chapter! I loved all the caring and concern Viggo showed Orlando and Orli's realization that he was being wooed. Made me all warm and happy inside! And, that Viggo was made equally happy by Orlando's acknowledgment that they were boyfriends.

Wonderful update!
*hugs*
WN

[jenexell]

Thanks for the awesome feedback hun! (and sorry for the delay in my reply. *looks sheepish*

I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter! I felt it was time for some warm and fuzzies after all that UST! LOL.

[belle_lestrange]

so happy to see an update of this! and what a wonderful chapter it was *big hug* i really loved it :) poor orlando being stuck in that play....

(oh and i hope i don't seem rude now or so, but urm...i noticed this is like chapter 28 of the story already and since i am thinking about how people manage to write so long and great stories and all today i thought maybe you could give me some tips or something? here or e-mail or whatever. it is also okay if you say no or "i have no idea" or so. i am just interested because it seems i am helpless with getting more details into my stories to make them longer than 10-15 chapters *doh* okay, sorry i rambled on so much here now...)

as always i am looking forward to the next chapter :) *big hug*

[jenexell]

Thanks for the comment hun! I'm so glad you liked it.

As for your request, I'll be happy to help you out. Email sounds best, or maybe over yahoo messenger?

Let me know.

jenexell_fic @ yahoo . co . uk

[tati]

thanks for putting this huge grin on my face :D i love the way Viggo is 'wooing' Orlando and Orlando seems to be enjoying it as well, eh?

[jenexell]

Oh yeah, Orlando is certainly enjoying the attention! LOL

Glad you enjoyed the chapter hunny. *huggles and smooches*

Thanks for the comment, and sorry it took so long to reply.

[roomfor2]

*sing-songs* Orlando has a boyfriend, Orlando has a boyfriend..

And what an adorable boyfriend he is! I wasn't even sure Viggo would be able to pull Orlando out of his bad mood.
Vig should have suggested taking a bath together if he was worried about Orlando falling asleep ;)

[jenexell]

Viggo and Orlando sitting in a tree K I S S I N G...

Sorry couldn't resist! LOL

I love the bath idea. I should really consider that!

Thanks for the comment hunny, and sorry it took so long to reply.

*huggles and smooches*