Comments | jenexell: [FIC] Progress - R

jenexell

[FIC] Progress - R - 5/7+epi

Apr 21, 2013 11:10

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fic, suzie costello, owen harper, sempiternitas, toshiko sato, jack harkness, janto, ianto jones

Comments 26

angelsphonebox April 21 2013, 15:16:51 UTC

So many great things to say about this update!!! Ianto's day in the tourist office was brillaint... "9:04 a.m Homicidal urges" LOL! Especially with Mrs. Miggins... there's one person who probably deserves to have the Pattern used on her... I love how Ianto is able to sucker punch the alien... you get the sense that he has had a very tough life before he went to University... & it seems he also has a photographic memory?... I think Jacks soon going to realize, if he hasn't already, that they have a real treasure on their hands with Ianto. I also loved how he's obviously cleaned the kitchen, without anyone telling him to! & his reaction when Jack walked in while he was eating his cereal was priceless. & now the "thing in the basement" is using a perception filter? Brilliant!!!! Very Harry Potter, I did not see that coming but it makes perfect sense. Really love this story and can't wait for the next update.

jenexell April 24 2013, 09:17:01 UTC

Not sure I get the Harry Potter reference, but thank you for the amazing comment.

Jack is a numpty - fact. LOL. But he'll wise up eventually, that I can promise.

I'm so glad you're still enjoying the story so much and like all the twists and turns I've put in.

Thank you again!!!!

*Huge grin*

fide_et_spe April 21 2013, 19:00:18 UTC

Another great chapter. I really love how you've put so much humour into your plotty story. Ianto's first day was great, very funny.

I'm really intrigued as to what's going on, and how it all connects.

jenexell April 24 2013, 09:17:47 UTC

Thank you for your comment. I'm so glad you enjoy the humour, as I can't seem to write without it. Makes writing angst... interesting! LOL.

Thanks again for the comment!

krazykitten46 April 21 2013, 19:16:47 UTC

I sense a pattern developing. It is nice to see Ianto getting on with his life so to speak.

jenexell April 24 2013, 09:18:23 UTC

Yes, there is a Pattern... its inside Ianto and is giving the TW team brain ache! LOL.

Thanks for the comment hun!

katwillow April 21 2013, 19:18:48 UTC

Wonderful from I's diary (please keep that up) to the reactions of the others to him.

Tak

jenexell April 24 2013, 09:19:04 UTC

More Ianto daily life moments - yep, can do!

So glad you're liking this, and thank you so much for the comment.

laura_iskra April 21 2013, 22:36:03 UTC

go ianto!

it was great to have his view on his first work day, with all that it entailed, and yay for him being smart and able to defend himself (almost)..

jenexell April 24 2013, 09:20:52 UTC

Ianto sucker punch - first seen in 2007 (Cyberwoman) Had to recreate it. Makes me both wince and cheer every time I see that little bit of that ep... ow for Jack, Yay for Ianto.

Thanks for the comment hun! Always appriciated!