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middler2008 April 28 2013, 14:32:04 UTC
Great update. I loved Suzie stopping Jack from running in all guns blazing. Lovely story thank you.

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jenexell May 1 2013, 17:28:12 UTC
You're most welcome. Glad you enjoyed it! Thank you so much for the comment!

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ttfan April 28 2013, 15:39:22 UTC
2nd fave chapter from this story. Epic Tosh and love the stand off with Jack and the bad guys at the end. Great chapter babe *huggles*

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jenexell May 1 2013, 17:28:41 UTC
second fave huh? *huff*

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fide_et_spe April 28 2013, 16:47:23 UTC
Oh well that's a cliffhanger! I feel very bad for the poor alien girl. I'm glad you had her rescued, I hope Jack can get her home.

Really looking forward to the next instalment, you've created a really interesting world.

I hope Jack somehow comes to realise that poor Ianto is an innocent, bless him.

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jenexell May 1 2013, 17:29:48 UTC
You know, I've never really seen this chapter being a cliffhanger, but I suppose you're right, it is isn't it? I'm so glad you like the world I've created, lord knows its rattled around my head long enough. thank you so much for the comment and your support!

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angelsphonebox April 28 2013, 22:03:58 UTC
Nooo! An evil cliffhanger! Wonderful story!! You kept me on the edge of my seat the whole time. Your character development is outstanding! I love seeing the characters grow and develop over the course of the story. I really am excited for the next installment to this series.

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jenexell May 1 2013, 17:30:39 UTC
Sorry. didn't mean to be evil...

well alright, maybe I did.

Thank you so much for your comment and you have no idea how happy it makes me that you've enjoyed it so much.

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sammydragoncat April 28 2013, 23:04:30 UTC
Loved the update! They really should not underestimate Tosh!

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jenexell May 1 2013, 17:31:01 UTC
Nope. never under-estimate the Tosh. You know what they say... its always the quiet ones.

Thanks so much for the comment!

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