[DEATH NOTE] Fic: Poppies, Mello/Hal, PG-13

Mar 02, 2008 22:29

Title: Poppies
Author: jengou
Pairings: Mello/Hal, mentions of Near and Gevanni.
Genre: Fluff
Rating: PG-13
Spoilers: Spoilers for the entire manga
Word count: 926
Disclaimer: My love for M/H, it is hot and fiery! Death Note still isn't mine though.
Acknowledgement: Written for kefanii, as backstory for the wonderful Hal/Mello art she drew and scapebread coloured for ( Read more... )

mellohal, mellomatt, gevanninear

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jengou March 2 2008, 23:25:17 UTC
Hahahahaha, YAY! I'm so relieved you liked XD *huggles*

Also, very happy to pimp your Kaiji fic, but the link you gave me doesn't work anymore ;_;

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jenhippo March 2 2008, 23:29:28 UTC
I think Blair said she capped it, will bug her for it!

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scapebread March 2 2008, 23:37:58 UTC
I LIKE IT VERY MUCH. Oh my god, so entertaining yet so cute and sweet. ♥ ♥ ♥

PS: I KNOW, I still need to finish your drawing, but I also need to learn how to colour again first lol. It's been too long.

PPS: Oh, that was the single most well done fake LJ cut I have ever seen. I flipped back and forth between pages on my browser trying to figure out why my flist said there were no comments on this entry when there CLEARLY WERE for like, 3 minutes, hahaha.

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jengou March 2 2008, 23:49:11 UTC
Whee, I'm so happy~ Thank you thank you! Haven't ficced since, err, September 07, was scared that I couldn't fic anymore D: So I understand re: your colouring!

PS: I FEEL SO BAD ABOUT ALL MY NITPICKY REQUESTS, can I pay part of the commission upfront or something kdjfakdjfdjfla

PPS: Lolol, I has skillz?

PPPS: AAAAAHHHHH YOU COLOURED MY PIC I SHALL CREDIT YOU TOO I AM AN IDIOT. Fic was written for Kef cos she kindly requested Kaiji fanart for me at /a/, and the people there made her write porn for them in exchange (selfish buggers!), and she wrote EPIC porn XDDD

I wish there were more fluffy DN fics, even though I know it doesn't really suit the genre whatevs~

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scapebread March 3 2008, 00:00:25 UTC
Hahha, don't worry about all the nitpicking and stuff. I have become very customer service oriented these days, so I will not take money until you are happy with it 8D.

FLUFF FITS EVERYWHERE. One of us just need to start a revolution. I vote you because you are clearly best at it, haha.

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jengou March 3 2008, 13:46:12 UTC
Awesomeness! And revolution sounds tasty, we can be, like, the Powerpuff girls! You draw, I write, Kef can market?? I think I'm the bitchy green puff ;D

AND I SEE YOUR MELLO/HAL FANART, alas I cannot have it on my window because I am at work :-((((( But I loved it!

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lumcheng March 3 2008, 00:02:27 UTC
............. “Don’t lump me in with that annoying booger-flicking fiend,” Mello scowled.
and
To toss and turn in the bed alone was annoying enough, having two people toss and turn in the same bed was a nightmare.
made me laugh so hard!!! TRUUUU, true, for the 2nd XD~

andandand... was that for Maaaaatty? “I told you, House Rule #5, smoking happens outside,”

Ahaha, you rock, Jen!!! *_*

no constructive thingies today, because I love the pair and spazzing over you XD

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jengou March 3 2008, 13:50:23 UTC
Haha, I'm glad I made you laugh!! I WISH that Hal and Mello can comfort each other and help each other sleep better at night, but I don't really see that happening. Both of them probably have a number issues and nightmares to do what they do now...

Hahaha, YEP, that was for Matt! I can't help making a reference to Matt in every fic I write :ppp

Thank you, thank you, thank you for lovely comment! ♥

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glowstuck March 3 2008, 01:34:28 UTC
WTFFFF, why is your writing so win? ;_; I enjoyed this thoroughly~ And it also made me giggle at times. Like,

“Your slutty ways. I've noticed them." totally made me think of Hal going, "My slutty ways. Let me show you them."

“I told you, House Rule #5, smoking happens outside,” was just brilliant. The thought of Matt and Mello sitting down together to compile a list of rules for living together makes me laugh and snort.

BUT YES, ADORABLE AND SASSY. THAT WAS WHAT THIS FIC WAS.

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jengou March 3 2008, 16:57:28 UTC
Awww, thank you for such a sweet comment! Was feeling rather insecure after not having ficced for half a year, glad that I can still squeeze a few giggles out of you ^^

Haha, I actually think Matt says things like "My mad hacking skills. Let me show you them." And Mello subconsciously picks it up but uses them wrong kinda...

Hee hee, I also like the thought of them sitting together and establishing the House Rules! Mello will pretty much dictate it, Matt's involvement would be limited to typing it up, and of course Matt would intentionally type things out wrong, like, "House Rule #5, Chocolate Eating Happens Outside" *koff koff*

THANK YOU THANK YOU :D

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jengou March 3 2008, 17:07:59 UTC
Ahh, I wouldn't be surprised! But I'm happy you commented anyway ♥ I think with M/M, because of their impending deaths, I always tried to include a sense of desperation, and also make everything they say be significant somehow? With this one I just wanted a calm, slice-of-daily-life-with-lazy-sex-on-the-side kinda feel. I also think I have lower standards for het, haha, since I don't really read it and think buttsecks makes everything better 8D

I'm a bit shocked and flattered you read it, thank you again ^___^

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