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The Most Natural Thing

May 02, 2012 00:31

Title: The Most Natural Thing
Author: jenlee1
Rating: PG-13
Setting: SH ‘09 movieverse
Word count: 2300
Warnings: Spoilers for the new film.
Summary: Train car, post-munitions factory. Missing scene from AGoS.
A/N: Written for a fic prompt by the lovely enkiduts asking for Holmes’s POV near the end of this particular scene, though it grew a bit from what I originally ( Read more... )

setting: 2009 movieverse, sherlock holmes, fiction, slash

Comments 38

fiery_fox2 May 3 2012, 13:51:28 UTC

Oh, hon. How amazing. <3

jenlee1 May 4 2012, 02:31:25 UTC

Thank you! Glad it pleased :)

starlightshade May 3 2012, 18:51:17 UTC

Ouch! Intense, perfectly researched (loss of sensation in the fingers after broken shoulder bones/dislocations), and...

Ah, what am I saying? You drew me in from the start, held me breathless throughout, their voices were spot-on and I was transported in time and space.

Holmes running in the end? Perfection. Thank you!

jenlee1 May 4 2012, 02:52:30 UTC

Thank you, dear - glad it pleased!

Holmes had a rather difficult time of it in the film, and I've always been fascinated with the gap in this particular scene... and so there's this, I suppose, for better or worse ;)

Thanks again for the kind words, and I'm quite flattered that you enjoyed it. <3

agaryulnaer86 May 7 2012, 02:15:31 UTC

This is wonderful. I can't think of any way to express how much I adored this.

jenlee1 May 9 2012, 02:02:37 UTC

Thank you! I'm delighted that you enjoyed it :)

cherish4 May 17 2012, 19:16:27 UTC

Beautiful and angsty and heart-wrenching!

jenlee1 May 20 2012, 23:15:17 UTC

Thanks very much! Glad it pleased :)

anonymous May 23 2012, 10:44:42 UTC

This is so well written and I'm very glad that you've
given us this gift. Thank you very much. I absolutely
LOVE your stories and I've read and re-read them many times.

Um... but because I'm tiresomely pedantic, do you mind a Britpic?

'Boxcar' is N. American use. In the UK it's 'freight wagon' or 'goods' wagon'. And 'railway carriage' not train car. And as I've just enjoyed 'Leverage' for about the ohhh ..30th? time, may I just say that it's 'pavement' not 'sidewalk'?

jenlee1 June 18 2012, 02:49:07 UTC

Thanks very much - that's quite a lovely compliment! *blushes* I do apologize for the delay in replying... RL has been rather hectic of late, and I seem to have fallen a bit behind.

The Britpics are duly noted, and thanks again for the kind words. I'm quite flattered that you've found so much to enjoy here, and it's very sweet of you to drop by and tell me so. <3