Winter of you and i

[jennieeatworld]

“I’m getting cold. You used to have a heart, now I guess it’s just a stone.” He smiled

Comments

I love you!

[irishhusband]

Oh dearest, that's the most awesome story I've ever read...and so sad. Man I was so mad that I died. I mean seriously, I fell in love with that story, it felt real, I felt the kissing, the love-making, the road, the drive, the music, everything. And I miss it now. I promise that I'll never die like that...I don't think that's God's plan for me. Man...that was an awesome story. You write like a well-experienced author. I don't know how to describe how it made me feel...except that it really did make me feel. Not many stories by any writer can do that. You're amazing.

[jennieeatworld]

Thank you, sweetness, its just a rough draft, though. I'm not very good at criticizing my writing so I appriciate every comment you give me. I love you so much. I can't describe the way it made me feel either, I guess we feel (or dont feel) the same way. It's missing something, though. I know that.

much love,

jhen