Comments | jenny_grrl: watching him die

jenny_grrl

watching him die

Dec 28, 2004 09:38

I held him in dominion, gently as he wept, licking the salt from off his skin. I made love in placid locus, bereaved him of his breath while rapt in angry fervor. He made my body his shelter, trembled on a precipice, worshiped while inside... surrendered, left surfeit and succumbed. In wild nights and tempestuous days we loved like King and ( Read more... )

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the man I fell in love erisreg December 28 2004, 16:04:06 UTC

desire is the mortar that binds the stones of love, creating the tower of passion,.. where many a heart is kept locked from the world,.. o.o

nice work babe,.:)

I had to look "Illahie" up... baldsug December 28 2004, 16:11:04 UTC

Brilliant imagery.

I had a friend who was married with kids and in order to support them, quit his teaching job and took a job with a high-powered consulting firm. Inside of 4 years he was divorcing his wife because she and the kids were getting in the way of him becoming a partner. He is now remarried to someone who works for the same company and has 2 more kids with her and still works for that company. To all the world he seems a respectable family man. To me he is the lowest piece of dirt there is.

We're the sum total of our actions, not our words. That's what I was getting at in my last post. People should not be known by the promises they make, but by the ones they try and keep. That includes whispered promises to another of "this is who I am"

Re: I had to look "Illahie" up... jenny_grrl December 31 2004, 13:43:13 UTC

People should not be known by the promises they make, but by the ones they try and keep.I'm partially inclined to disagree with this, but partially inclined to agree... here's where my division comes in. I have known people to make promises who are empty promise makers. They make them to appear more than what they are. They may blindly believe they have intentions to _try_ and keep them... but they're only barely aware of their own agendas. No one should get a pat on the back for making promises they have no intentions of keeping... and it goes double for promises of who a person is... especially if you're in a relationship with that person. If you can't even be honest about who you are, then how you can you ever anticipate any kind of trust to be formed? -making a face ( ... )

no illusions vjdincorp December 28 2004, 17:50:38 UTC

Amazing ,how your words transfer.I forgot how capturing you are to your readers and friends.Hope your new yewars plans are grand Jenn,enjoy

lilithraevyn December 28 2004, 18:38:34 UTC

I am to be ever-wary of the blackwinged wanderer, mysterious and dark. However tempting he may be.

It usually is just a shroud.

*hugs*

jenny_grrl December 31 2004, 13:37:19 UTC

-nodding- Yes, tempting but dangerous... though it's not their danger that's so perilous... it's their carelessness. Negligence and selfishness are a terrible combination. -smiling softly, hugging you tight-

serreal December 28 2004, 19:35:26 UTC

beautiful as always....hm and that new layout you have there is breathtaking. ;)