Two Posts in One Night

[jennybobdole]

I'm entering into an essay contest to win money for the shelter where we got the boys. I'm limited to 300 words. Let me know what edits you'd make.

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[cider]

I think "underbite" is one word. Could be wrong. And I think there's a stronger way to conclude the essay, but I don't know what yet. I think the rest of it is SPECTACULAR.