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May 22, 2004 10:28
PART ONE: COMING TOGETHER (
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I am so sorry
beautifulwithin
May 22 2004, 09:23:02 UTC
Um, I don't know. You see there is something in it that makes it not clear. Its very suspenseful and great and good, but ... uhm...
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foxkid200
May 22 2004, 09:26:04 UTC
this is very good but u used the first chapter to build up discriptions. nice but looking forward to the next one!!!!
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beautifulwithin
May 22 2004, 18:39:59 UTC
i get it now, if i thought my story was rated 'r' for violence. yours is rated 'r' for sex
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