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jerbearthompson

He Says

Apr 13, 2009 15:10

Title: He Says
Author: JerBearThompson
Rating: PG
Characters: Jack, Ianto, OMC.
Summary: ‘When he says he wants somebody else, he doesn’t mean you.’
Disclaimer: In the beginning, there was RTD. He said to the BBC, Let there be Torchwood, and it was done.

( He Says )

fic, torchwood, he says

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jerbearthompson April 13 2009, 05:45:15 UTC

I was aiming for more of a... you don't know who he chose kind of ending. But gosh there were a lot of mistakes in that, I just went through and edited them all.

jerbearthompson April 13 2009, 05:46:06 UTC

Okay I changed the last sentence... Does that make more sense?

missthingsplace April 13 2009, 06:54:42 UTC

Oh very good, and i love how it ends.

jerbearthompson April 13 2009, 12:42:55 UTC

Thank you :)

dvanulya April 13 2009, 07:11:28 UTC

Gah! You've just killed me.
Nicely done, though.

jerbearthompson April 13 2009, 12:43:20 UTC

Terribly sorry about that. And thank you :)

seether_79 April 13 2009, 07:29:33 UTC

Thats just plain mean lol, ending it like that. I really enjoyed this, very well done :D

jerbearthompson April 13 2009, 12:45:18 UTC

Thank you so much :)

hab318princess April 13 2009, 08:50:22 UTC

loved that (although I really, really want to know who Ianto chose)

great emotional wallop, brilliant story

jerbearthompson April 13 2009, 12:48:24 UTC

I'm not really sure who he chose, myself. Although my fangirl heart is screaming at me, 'JACK!'

Thank you :)

hab318princess April 13 2009, 12:56:24 UTC

yeah, same here!