What Makes A Family

[jeri_1116]

Title: What Makes A Family
Author: jeri_1116
Rating: G
Word Count: 3,056
Beta: seajellybaby
Summary: Luke and Noah don't mind sharing.
Notes: Written for the new community nukeminibang. Also thank you to random_nic for hosting this and helping to keep Nuke alive. :)
Disclaimer: I owns nothing, nada, zilch. But let's be clear.... if I did, Noah never would've went blind, him and Luke

Comments

[buttercup32409]

Loved it! You nailed all three personalities. Loved the banter between the boys and Jade. You could tell she was miserable, and they were doing everything they could to cheer her up. And the love between Luke and Noah was amazing as always. Of course Luke would want the baby to have Noah's last name. And of course Noah would worry that Luke would feel left out if it happened.

In a word....perfect!

[jeri_1116]

Thanks for reading Nita. :)

[jb1183]

So great, Arsena! Love the humor here and also the depth. Having Jade carry their child is a great idea and would no doubt lead to all sorts of interesting scenarios. I also like Noah's worry that Luke will feel left out and Luke's insistence that they redeem the Mayer name. Small moments like that say so much about how deeply they love each other.

Your writing is always so fresh and original. A real treat to read!

[jeri_1116]

Thanks Jim, so glad you liked it. It took me forever to come up with something to write, because I was seriously blocked. I thought this would suck, but reading these comments put me at ease. :)

[jeri_1116]

Glad you liked Bijou. Thanks for reading. :)

[sarahsezlove]

I had a big ol' smile on my face throughout this whole fic.
I *loved* how everyone got in on the action - just one big happy family, about to be added to.

This is a perfect slice of Nukey goodness. I love it :)

[jeri_1116]

Awe just like my other bitches, you always know what to say. ;)

Thanks for reading Sarah. Kisses.

[appassionata1]

This story is a pure delight to read. It again showcases how you can take the small moments and magnify them to where there is no longer story and reader, but a real life experience. You succeed brilliantly where the simplistic portrayals and one dimensional characterizations by the ATWT writers failed miserably. It's so refreshing to read your work. It's always so original and daring. Also love your artwork.

[jeri_1116]

Faye, your comments make me blush. Thanks for that. Kisses.