What Makes A Family

[jeri_1116]

Title: What Makes A Family
Author: jeri_1116
Rating: G
Word Count: 3,056
Beta: seajellybaby
Summary: Luke and Noah don't mind sharing.
Notes: Written for the new community nukeminibang. Also thank you to random_nic for hosting this and helping to keep Nuke alive. :)
Disclaimer: I owns nothing, nada, zilch. But let's be clear.... if I did, Noah never would've went blind, him and Luke

Comments

[wheelie47]

Ah Arsena!!! This was just perfect!! You had me smiling all the way through. You had their characters spot on - from Jade's frustration, Noah's worry over the name and Luke's reassurance that Noah and their child will do good by the Mayer name.

Gorgeous pic!

And that kid will be lucky indeedl She'll be amazing with all their different characteristics.

[jeri_1116]

I'm glad you liked it Anne. And again- like I said to Sarah... Like my other bitches, you always say the right things. Kisses.

[daan73]

very different story
i liked the unusual approach
I really like that you found a way to write their own personalities into this story
really nice :)

[jeri_1116]

Thanks for reading Dani.

[sweetiejelly]

This is adorable, Shavon. I love the closeness you depicted between the three of them. And ah, Noah's insecurities about himself/his name just makes me want to hug him. I especially love the light, breezy, spring/new beginning feeling of this. Great job. <3

[random_nic]

She lies! Her real name is Treniqua Shavonte Jackson.

[jeri_1116]

You mad cause you wish you were black and had an ass like mine. Admit it!

[random_nic]

I do admit it. But I'm willing to trade, if you'd rather be Nykeisha.

[seajellybaby]

You know... not really selling the whole pregnancy thing to me here ;-) LOL

But I've just had another read through and again TOTALLY love this! I simply adore the way you write Luke and Noah... Somehow you take small moments and make them mean so much!

I also love how you're not afraid to play with canon relationships and create your own universe from them!

The idea to have Jade carry a child, not for them, but with them, is such an interesting take on Nuke. And it's totally believable that this could happen, given that their personalities seem to fit so well together!

Luke and Jade's scene is my favourite in this! They are like brother and sister! It's so cute!

Also, love the banner ;-) HAHA

And that kid at the end is fantastic!

[jeri_1116]

Glad you caught that! I don't want people thinking Jade's gonna pop out the baby and then leave. Nope that kids hers, Noah's and Luke's.

I loved writing Jade and Luke's parts. I wanted to make it longer, but thought I should wrap it up.

Thanks for reading Gill. ALWAYS love seeing your comments.

The banner was alright, the person who did it could've done better. ;)

Kisses.

[moongirl24]

I love Nuke as parents! And sharing a baby with Jade is a really interesting concept. I liked this a lot! :)

[jeri_1116]

Thanks for reading, glad you liked it. :)