Literature Entry Week Ten

[jessekants]

 Here is a poem that I wrote for my week ten entry, a bit late but better than never I guess...

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FIRE FANNED OUT

AND FOUND ME HERE, WHERE I

Comments

Cool poem

[seek_randomness]

Hey! I love the way you used colour and structure in this poem! It caught my eye as i was scanning the latest updates! Good job ;)

Janelle

wow

[mj_13]

Hey Jesse

I really like what you've done with this poem. The visual appeal is so captivating! I can see and feel, both literally and figuratively, the fire that you speak of. This is so short and to the point, but I think that's what makes this so good. I really like this piece :)

[michaelgriffith]

I like it Jesse ... concrete poetry with a digital twist... now would it not be something if you could also animate those bits of red..... that is what the kinetic poetry movement is all about... and there is a lot of it on the net... have a look, explore...
MG