Spring

Mar 19, 2008 23:14

A POEM

Some things make sense to me
I can fathom why birds like to sing
Some mysteries, I don't have the key
Like why I get bad headaches every spring

Unrelated Note: In the last few days I've started listening to the Sweeney Todd soundtrack a lot. It's good. I'd like to see it performed.

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jeereg March 20 2008, 07:30:54 UTC
Have you seen the movie?

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jgordner March 21 2008, 01:31:09 UTC
I have! It's what inspired me to first download the soundtrack from Zune (though I got the stage version since it has The Ballad of Sweeney Todd, which is great).

I really liked the movie. I thought it could have been a little bit better to be great, but I still really liked it. Did you see it? Like it?

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anonymous March 20 2008, 14:34:49 UTC
Your eyes haven't adjusted to the brightness of the sun and the colors of the blooming flowers.

Once your eyes adjust, you will cease to have an achy head.

I recommend sunglasses, sir.

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lilmissbooyah March 22 2008, 16:22:59 UTC
Crap. I was anonymous right up there.

Who *else* would suggest sunglasses and call you 'sir', sir?

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jgordner March 22 2008, 16:29:09 UTC
Actually, I have aunt who calls me "Sir" -- she has addressed packages and letters to me as "Sir Jonathan", and in fact calls me that in person. She still does this; yesterday I got such a package and it had chocolate in it and a mini slinky!

Further, I have an aunt that is an Optician, and might very well suggest glasses of some sort to cure what ails me.

Lucky for you, these aunts are not the same person. One is Auntie Shelley and one is Auntie Marcy, or sometimes shortened to Auntie M (like from the Wizard of Oz). So the only conclusion is that the comment above had to be you.

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poetry anonymous March 20 2008, 18:07:21 UTC
Your poetry needs a little help, but I get the sentiment lil' un. That's too bad you are getting bad headaches...allergies? Is it nice in Seattle? It's perdy grey here...waiting for the sun to come out. And ps- where have you been lately? Haven't seen you online...

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Re: poetry jgordner March 21 2008, 01:29:37 UTC
Whatever! I'm the poetry king!

I am a poetry king
I hate the season of spring
There's one reason I'm
A fan of this time
I practice my baseball swing!

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Re: poetry dead_thought March 21 2008, 10:22:47 UTC
hmm...

have you considered other career choices? ...computers perhaps?

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Re: poetry jgordner March 22 2008, 16:39:43 UTC
Riggs thought my future was elsewhere
He thought I'd do well at other gigs
He said on the side of caution, I should err
I'm all in with my poetry, Riggs!

Riggs thought my poetry did suck
He thought he could tell me what to do
Unforunately, he was out of luck
I'll write all the poetry I want, foo'

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