[fic] Sky - 1/1

[jibunnohana]

This is for izon_no_niwa - she requested it and it's her birthday. Happy birthday! Hope you like this~ ♥

Title: Sky
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Ni~ya x Sakito
Comments: AU, based on the song and video for Sky by Loveholic. It's a little bit sad, but not quite like the video. X3

Comments

[anyotherknight]

This was exactly what I needed today. Thank you. ♥

[jibunnohana]

You're very welcome. ^^

[izon_no_niwa]

THANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOU
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

First paragraphs I was worried if I'm going to encounter death but I was cackling like mad since it was my birthday. I had a sulky day in school but coming home and checking the netz made me feel better, haha.
I had to pause and hit my head somewhere somehow everytime I am reminded of the video... not to mention I was playing the song while reading this.
“I thought it would be the perfect time to say I love you,” Niya added quietly, watching Sakito rather than the display. “In case you wanted to know….” --- Made me melt. Really. U__U

[jibunnohana]

Awww, it does make me happy that you liked it so much! *hugs* Happy birthday again! ♥

And I don't do deathfics, so no worries with there. The dog was a tempting addition, but then I completely forgot about it later. I guess it would have been kind of weird in this, huh? To happyfluffy for the mood, perhaps. I'm really glad my interpretation of the story made sense, it took me quite a while to figure out how to make this not a deathfic and what could have happened to make Ni all beat up. It worked out, I guess! XD

[violetpoof]

*in awe*

[jibunnohana]

*^^* Thank you for reading~

[hayasaki]

Beauutiful. I was also so fearing that Ni wouldn't be waking up, but I kept my hopes up for him and they were rewarded! I really loved the scene with the two on the motorbike together, and at the lake as well <3

[jibunnohana]

Thank you! ^^ I'm very happy it turned out well. And no, never deathfics from me, just can't do it. X3 That is my favorite scene too - Ni is such a little daredevil, lol.

[bauci]

Ah, it was already quoted, but

“I thought it would be the perfect time to say I love you,” Niya added quietly, watching Sakito rather than the display. “In case you wanted to know….”

so.perfect.

A truly lovely read. I'd say more but all my thoughts are jumbled and keep jumping from one scene to another, thinking them through again and trying to build them into something solid. But that's just my minds problem, it was pretty in that disjointed way that you wrote it. Ah, what am I trying to say... it shook my mind in the most pleasant way, I love it when I can't get the fic out of my head.

Thank you for writing and sharing this with us ♥!

[jibunnohana]

Ah, sorry it was confusing! I didn't know how the formatting would go over when I was working on it. :/ But I'm glad you enjoyed it anyway~ ♥

[bauci]

No, I meant that it created so many different thoughts and emotions in me that it was overwhealming XD The formating was fine!!!

♥

[jibunnohana]

Oh, okay~ X3;