Star Trek Fic: Attention (Complete)

[jillfox22]

Title: Attention
Fandom: Star Trek XI
Pairing: Spock/Kirk/McCoy threesome fun
Rating: NC-17
Warning: Spanking and smut
Disclaimer: I'm just playing in Paramount's universe. I don't own the boys and make no money from them.
Summery: PWP basically. Kirk and McCoy get into a bit of trouble while on shore leave. Spock's not pleased.

Comments

Wow.

[shini_k]

Ok, so spanking is usually not a kink I go for, but HELL this was HOT!!!

Re: Wow.

[jillfox22]

Thank you.

This is only my second attempt at writing fic and very my first attempt at porn, so to receive a wow is just, wow;-)

[mangst]

Oh what a delicious web of deception our three boys have made. And the consequences were equally delicious. ;p

[jillfox22]

Thank you.

Deception is the root of all evil, or all fun, depending on your point of view;-)

[silver__luna]

that was pretty awesome... I love how even with everything happening you were able to keep them in character. :D

[jillfox22]

Now that is a huge compliment thank you:-)

[dizilla]

Ah I love Kirk's way of thinking about how great a night it was. XD Loved how you kept McCoy so well in character (along with the others but this stood out more) especially while being disciplined. And I loved the twist in the end, *hee*. Nicely done. ^_^

[jillfox22]

Thank You:)

Kirk's way of thinking took time to get into, I went through the story re-writing passages several times before I was happy with him.

McCoy is just love, I heart him so much:)

Poor Spock, but It's his own fault, logically he would have to realize that Kirk and McCoy would turn the tables on him, it's dangerous to be giving them ideas;)

[sangueuk]

I just loved this - more please!

[jillfox22]

Thank you:) I loved writing it.

If I can find the time I will definitely write more, I love them so much.