I Like the Way You Move, Part 4/4

Jul 15, 2011 22:07

Title: I Like the Way You Move, Part 4/4
Author: mimi_oly
Rating: NC-17
Pairing/Focus: Onew/Kyuhyun/Eunhyuk
Word count: Part Four: 2750. Total, 8000.
Genre: Friendship, Smut
Summary: Jinki asks Hyukjae for help with his dancing and gets more of an education than he bargained for. Set in April/May 2010.

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Part One.

Part Read more... )

kyuhyun, eunhyuk, author: mimi_oly, !fanfic, rating: nc-17, onew

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g_odalisque13 July 16 2011, 06:04:51 UTC
spot!
i have to go to bed b/c i have to wake up to walk some dogs (dog sitting lol), but i will read this asap!

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g_odalisque13 July 16 2011, 20:42:30 UTC
fdkgnjkds bkjb vkdfjnkjvdsmkzj
this was worth the wait!
i'd never think of onew/kyuhyun as a pairing and throw hyukjae in there and it's 100% nothing i've ever read before! but you made it work so well. it was so realistic and believable.
i love how they babied him- and kyuhyun being evil is of course a plus. haha.
and the smut was fkkkdjsjgnde. /dies
this was brilliant to say the least!

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jinkibumiminho July 16 2011, 20:46:43 UTC
I'm so glad you liked it!
I never expected this combo either...until I saw the Sukira cam, and it just came out of that. I really liked the idea of the maknae/leader flip flop.
Thanks for the lovely comment!

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stjoan4eva July 16 2011, 07:59:35 UTC
spot

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stjoan4eva July 16 2011, 22:27:25 UTC
I am this close to chaining you to a chair, Misery-style, and forcing you to write for me day and night. I'm delightfully stunnned and deliriously happy, for this divinely devious and deliciously decadent.

See? You've got me tossing out alliteration like nobody's buisness.

I would quote parts that I love, but I'm sure I'd go over the comment limit and end up copypastaing 3/4 of the story here.

You're in trouble,miss. Now you have to write more more more! *shakes fist at you*

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jinkibumiminho July 16 2011, 22:40:44 UTC
[sorry Jenn, just look away for a sec, 'kay?]
GLOMPY KISSY KISSY GLOMP!
What lovely feedback! You gave me alliteration! How'd you know?

This sort of took on a life of its own. I couldn't bring myself to get too smutty with Hyuk because he's a self-proclaimed church boy, and I wanted to keep it realistic. I found myself wanting to play a bit with the idea of Hyuk steering Jinki to Kyu, but I didn't want it to be too obvious. Did it work?

I have several WIPs...plus the drabble bunnies seem to be shampooed free on a regular basis.

And how's YOUR muse these days?

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haiiro_ai July 16 2011, 16:34:41 UTC
Oh man, I am so glad I shared gifs with you~

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jinkibumiminho July 16 2011, 17:33:11 UTC
Wow, your comment is like a whole different pic spam! [Look at the naughty monkey pin on Kyu's jacket in the last one! edit: that is a monkey, isn't it?]
Thanks!

I'm glad you enjoyed the story. Thanks for helping inspire me!

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jinkibumiminho July 16 2011, 20:26:27 UTC
These guys made me do it:

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haiiro_ai July 17 2011, 14:07:31 UTC
And Sungmin just has no words.

All my comments are like that?

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kaybee38 July 16 2011, 17:33:09 UTC
This was so hot! Good job!

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jinkibumiminho July 16 2011, 17:33:31 UTC
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!

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scythegyen July 16 2011, 18:30:00 UTC
HOLY H- 1 sec. (walks over and closes door) Better. HELP! That was soo good. Just amazing.

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jinkibumiminho July 16 2011, 18:52:05 UTC
I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for stoping by!

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