Title: I Like the Way You Move, Part 4/4
Author:
mimi_olyRating: NC-17
Pairing/Focus: Onew/Kyuhyun/Eunhyuk
Word count: Part Four: 2750. Total, 8000.
Genre: Friendship, Smut
Summary: Jinki asks Hyukjae for help with his dancing and gets more of an education than he bargained for. Set in April/May 2010.
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i have to go to bed b/c i have to wake up to walk some dogs (dog sitting lol), but i will read this asap!
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this was worth the wait!
i'd never think of onew/kyuhyun as a pairing and throw hyukjae in there and it's 100% nothing i've ever read before! but you made it work so well. it was so realistic and believable.
i love how they babied him- and kyuhyun being evil is of course a plus. haha.
and the smut was fkkkdjsjgnde. /dies
this was brilliant to say the least!
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I never expected this combo either...until I saw the Sukira cam, and it just came out of that. I really liked the idea of the maknae/leader flip flop.
Thanks for the lovely comment!
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See? You've got me tossing out alliteration like nobody's buisness.
I would quote parts that I love, but I'm sure I'd go over the comment limit and end up copypastaing 3/4 of the story here.
You're in trouble,miss. Now you have to write more more more! *shakes fist at you*
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GLOMPY KISSY KISSY GLOMP!
What lovely feedback! You gave me alliteration! How'd you know?
This sort of took on a life of its own. I couldn't bring myself to get too smutty with Hyuk because he's a self-proclaimed church boy, and I wanted to keep it realistic. I found myself wanting to play a bit with the idea of Hyuk steering Jinki to Kyu, but I didn't want it to be too obvious. Did it work?
I have several WIPs...plus the drabble bunnies seem to be shampooed free on a regular basis.
And how's YOUR muse these days?
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Thanks!
I'm glad you enjoyed the story. Thanks for helping inspire me!
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All my comments are like that?
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