Comments | jk_west_la: For the Best (Milo/Rick)

coral_67 in jk_west_la

For the Best (Milo/Rick)

Nov 27, 2011 23:06

This is the first story that I have actually finished outside of high school!

But I was inspired by two of annievh's prompts for the Small Fandom Fest - “Rick hates kids” and “painful breakup”.

I find it hard to grade my own work, so I hope that it’s okay!

Bold is from Milo's POV.
( For the Best )

Comments 5

hardboiledbaby November 28 2011, 19:08:47 UTC

Congratulations on finishing your first story! Poor boys, they really need to talk! Thanks for sharing.

coral_67 November 29 2011, 02:58:56 UTC

Thank you so much!

annievh November 28 2011, 20:29:30 UTC

D'aww Coral!!

That point had been driven home during his doomed marriage while waiting for the results of a home pregnancy test.

HEAD CANON!!!

This was hard to read from the moment you said you picked "painfull break up" - I was like "noooooo" (yes, I prompted, I know, but still... sad). But it's a lovely heartbreaking story and it's so great that this is your first! Nice start!

Welcomed to fandom oficially!

coral_67 November 29 2011, 03:02:24 UTC

Thank you so much!

When I saw your prompts I just started writting, even though it was so sad!

The pregnancy thing has always been my headcanon! I guess I just figured that there was some push for him to end his marriage.

I think I still owe you a story. :)

annievh November 29 2011, 18:53:54 UTC

I think I still owe you a story. :)

If this kind of thought gets you writting more awesome fics, then yeah, you do
LOL