Fic: Perfect

[jmbalfe]

Title: Perfect
Rating: G, it's all tame - don't let that be a deterrent!
Pairing: Arthur/Merlin
Word Count: 590
Warnings: None
Spoilers: None
Summary: Arthur has always been the best. He has always had to be.
Notes: Beta-d for me by the amazing kathkin. All the mistakes she pointed out, not to mention any remaining, are all mine!

Comments

[bansheeqwn]

This was nice... Hopefully Arthur won't realize too late who it is that's as attentive to him as he is to his own men. Great start!

[jmbalfe]

Well, he's not that bright, hey (oh, no, he's down enough on himself, bad jmbalfe!) but hopefully won't be feeling all alone for too long. Thanks so much for reading/commenting!

[kathyh]

Very nice. Excellent character study of Arthur and what he hides behind the princely mask. Hope to see more from you :)

[jmbalfe]

Thank you so much for that comment - I'm surrounded by such fabulous writers that I was intimidated as all get out to post. Not fishing- I'm so happy with the responses, and that my take on Arthur seems to resonate with people. I really appreciate your reading and encouraging ^_^

[kathkin]

: D You already know I love this.

[jmbalfe]

And I'm totally over the moon about it! How wonderful of you to come and comment on it, even though you've read it already. You rock ^_^

[kathkin]

My beta always does that. >_> xD

[archaeologist_d]

It was a lovely character study. I really liked how you showed him shouldering all the responsibilities. Well done.

[jmbalfe]

Thank you! For the read, and the comment. It's what I saw in the show, as the series progressed and we saw him agonising over not being able to help his people. I think he feels everything very deeply. (Including, for sure, lurve for his worst ever manservant!)

[frakkin_addict]

You make me want to give Arthur a great big hug. Great look at his character and the burden he has to shoulder.

[jmbalfe]

Thanks so much! I ALWAYS want to give Arthur a big hug, the poor... gorgeous... *ehem*
Awesome to hear you liked it ^_^