Comments | jncar: Fic: Witness Protection, part 18/??

jncar

Fic: Witness Protection, part 18/??

Jan 01, 2013 17:08

Title: Witness Protection, part 18/??
Fandom: Parks and Recreation
Characters/Ships: Ben/Leslie, Chris/Ann, Andy/April, Ben/Pawnee, ensemble
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: ~ 5,400
Summary: When corporate whistleblowers Ben Adams and Chris Robinson barely escape an attempt on their lives, they gladly accept the protection of the Federal Witness ( Read more... )

witness protection, parks and rec, fic

Comments 12

shornt January 2 2013, 00:37:04 UTC

Okay whoa that cliffhanger, I was NOT expecting that and EVERYTHING HURTS ALWAYS. So happy to see an update for this, fzksejhfglsdjg. But jfc THE PAIN. AND MORE PAIN COMING. AND PAIN ALWAYS. But good pain. I think. grdjkfzhsd

courtknees1 January 2 2013, 03:36:36 UTC

DAMMIT CHRIS WHY. Just when I was really starting to like him! Arrrghhhh. I hope they stay, I really do! How exciting that we're approaching the climax - though if the calm before the storm is as exciting as this, I tremble to think what you have in store for us!

saucydiva January 2 2013, 03:50:06 UTC

OH no! I thought the Leslie/Chris scene was going to break my heart, and it totally did, but then I thought that at least I'd be ok after that. And instead you took a knife to my gut with that last scene. I'm going to go ahead and say it: it's not romantic to stick around Pawnee if it's going to get you, your girlfriend, or your partner murdered. On the other hand, asking someone to wait an indefinite amount of time while you go to trial and hopefully get to leave witness protection but maybe not? Also not romantic.

You're killing me here

stars_inthe_sky January 2 2013, 04:07:02 UTC

Argh, why did you have to post this right before I went to bed? Now I've been up reading, and I'm going to go to bed wondering what's about to happen, and thinking about what a bind our boys are in, and poor Leslie, and...

kyrieanne January 2 2013, 05:03:15 UTC

What I love this story is the way it keeps pressing out all the facets to this idea instead of just being plot, plot, plot. I love Chris' scenes and the moment with Leslie. I love the way you've framed what Ben and Leslie have and the terrible reality that what Ben and Chris are living isn't an actual life. All of these character moments raise the premise up to a whole new level. Love it!