Fic: Witness Protection, Part 20/??

[jncar]

Title: Witness Protection, part 20/??
Fandom: Parks and Recreation
Characters/Ships: Ben/Leslie, Chris/Ann, Andy/April, Ben/Pawnee, ensemble
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: ~ 6,500
Summary: When corporate whistleblowers Ben Adams and Chris Robinson barely escape an attempt on their lives, they gladly accept the protection of the Federal Witness

Comments

[americnxidiot]

Ahhh what a place to end it. This was done so well, the little moments of carelessness (like Ben posing for a picture for the Pawnee Journal), Chris and Ann having a moment of connection and then closure, the ever-hanging reminder that as happy as they are, the time-frame is really limited. And again, the ending.

Also if you ever feel the need to write that domestic fluff, please know it would always be welcome.

[kyrieanne]

Ohhh, angst! Love it. Also, I love how attentive you've been to Chris in this story. I think it is a great mirror to Ben's love-story with Leslie.

[shornt]

OH GOD CLIFFHANGERS ABOUND. That damn New Years scene with Leslie and Ben had me all choked up and I'm at /work/, so damn youuuuuu. That scene really did it for me; how deep into this they are already, and it's still even early in their time left. God, and like it hurts, ahhhh. And all the little slips in this and that ending omg, I'm ready and also not ready for shit to hit the fan. And so excited for more. JFC.

Oh also, I really like and appreciate the way you handled Chris and Ann in this. I got a bit nervous when they slept together, but your Chris is a lot more mature and together than the one in the show, and I really like that they're on the same page.

[c00kie]

You know, I'm not the biggest fan of Chris/Ann but I love the way you portray them here. And I really love Ben and Leslie being all gross and in love and Paul being reasonable about their relationship. I think my favorite scene though was Leslie's breakdown, which felt authentic and true to character and heartbreaking.

[spunkyar]

You are right...you are evil!! But we love you anyways. When I saw your update I squealed and my coworker asked if something was wrong. That's what you've done to me...I look like a crazy person. :)

This was a better update then I could have ever imagined. We got adorable Ben and Leslie, not depressed Chris and Ann, happy times for the whole gang and some crazy turns!! I can't believe Everson found them. I hope it wasn't Leslie's package, or Tom's picture, or the newspaper picture of them at the Christmas tree. Everyone is going to be in danger. I so so so can't wait to see what happens next. Please update soon you Beautiful Little Blue Jay!! :)