robotech fic - Maelström

[jo_anderson_rt]

Maelström
Chapter 7

They stood there watching Earth for a few seconds, without saying a word, without moving. Just there....

Comments

[gppr]

Very good addition, Jo, as usual. I like how the friendship is progressing. I also like how Lisa and Roy are healing from Claudia's loss. Lisa taking proactive steps to earn her happiness was good to read about. I am very intrigued regarding Rick's future role and how you are going to switch Lisa's romantic interest from little brother to big brother. And the other way around, too. :D

[jo_anderson_rt]

Thanks for the review G!
I think they need to start letting go claudia go and making their friendship grow and before they even notice it they will be in love of the other. I hope....
And about Rick... well I have had some troubles with him lately, it has become really hard to write him, because Roy's keeps popping in my head.

[kkm7806]

I love the part when they held hands. It was good to see their relationship is continuing to progress in this chapter. I don't want to see them rush into a relationship, but I also can't wait to see them together. I'm wondering how long it's going to take them to realize they are good for each other. Hopefully not too long:) Looking forward to chapter 8.

[jo_anderson_rt]

thank you so much for your review! and for all the reviews yo are so sweet to left them. It really means a lot to me.
I don't want to see them rush into a relationship, but I also can't wait to see them together.
hehehe I'm having the same problem :P I know that I have to create bonds between them, make them take things step by step but my mind keeps jumping forwards. I have more clear how things will happen once they are together than while they are getting there.

I'm wondering how long it's going to take them to realize they are good for each other.
I'm wondering that too, because from one side I know they have to take things slow, but I'm worried that the reader might bet bored because nothing had happened between them.

[gaelushawk]

Hola:)

Estuve leyendo tu historia los ultimos días y me pareció una idea muy interesante. No creo que sepas, yo soy muy fan de Claudia/Roy, encuentro que es la unica pareja en todo Rt que funciona en mi mente post-adultez; Pero encuentro que estas desarrollando muy bien la idea de de Roy y Lisa pudiendo enamorarse el uno del otro en tu historia.

Roy es mucho mas adulto que Rick y las interaccion son mas interesantes.

Y lisa por fin no es , la pobre victima del amor platonico no correspondido . Eso es liberador.

Espero que sigas escribiendo de forma regular. :) Suerte

[jo_anderson_rt]

hola!
No creo que sepas, yo soy muy fan de Claudia/Roy, encuentro que es la única pareja en todo Rt que funciona en mi mente post-adultez
yo también soy una fan de ellos, creo que son la única pareja que uno puede ver como real. No se si me explico, pero hay algo en su dinámica que me es mas honesta que cualquier otra pareja, puede ser porque no son perfectos, roy no es el príncipe azul ni claudia la princesa que necesita ser rescatada. para mi son mas humanos. Lastima que no los exploraron mas en rt.
Por lo mismo creeme que me costo un montón separarlos, pero andaba con la idea de Roy y Lisa entre ceja y ceja desde hace tiempo. Y no me quedo otra que matar a Claudia.

Roy es mucho mas adulto que Rick y las interacción son mas interesantes.
toda la razón por lo mismo creo que es una mejor opción para Lisa, porque creo (arriesgandome a que los fans de rick quieran matarme) que Rick es una mala copia de Roy.

Y lisa por fin no es , la pobre victima del amor platonico no correspondido . Eso es liberador. Si! aunque su cuota de