Loved the chapter! I wasn't expecting what played out in this chapter. Like Lisa, I was wrong about Roy. He didn't go back to his old ways. "...he moved closer to her, so close that he could rest his forehead against hers. I couldn't have survived the last months without you, he said in a soft, vulnerable voice." That was my favorite part. I also liked the end when they embraced. It was sweet. I hope they get together soon.
I'm so glad that you like the chapter. As much a ladies man that Roy is, I couldn't make him go back to his always not now that he is getting closer to Lisa. I know it has taken a while for them to get together, but once the sparkles start to appear everything will be faster... I hope so :P
This was a great chapter Jo. The chemistry you have developed between Roy and Lisa is very strong. You're making them belong together so naturally! And Rick? Who is that? :D
ok, I feel that we are approaching that time full of sparks we have been waiting from start, aren't we? yes we are!! finally!! it has been a long ride, too long for my own taste but necessary. I couldn't make them jump into bed immediately although I did want to at some point :P
I have really wanted to do a new banner for the LJ but the muse has refuse to come. I just need to find the inspiration... but I have noticed that there aren't much Roy/Lisa scenes in RT to get some screencaps...
Oh Em Gee... oh the angst. You're trying to give me a heart attack, don't you?
While the idea of Roy being so pissed off is kinda hot, I prefer him being all teddy bear... I think that's because I'm used to Lisa being the Ice Queen, but it's a nice change having them wishing them to rip each other's heads ^^... makes the make up better *winks*
What else? Good thing for Thompson to go to Lisa and apologise; very brave girl too! Knowing you, she'll be around to spice things up and create havoc.
And the make up scene had me crying like a baby!
“You hurt me,”“Of all people, I never thought you would judge me like that,”“Not after what we have gone trough,”I know I'm not perfect, I never pretended to be. I also know that I have made mistakes, but after all the time we spend together? I though you knew me -me, not Captain Fokker. I guess I was mistaken,”“I didn't deserve that. You just assumed I was shagging her, just like any stranger would, but you are my friend. You should have, at least, let me explain.” “I couldn't have survived
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I'm so glad you like it :) and yup thompson will stay around for a little while I like her. I'll update the capter as soon as I have my computer back. The chapter is already done all I need is my laptop and internet conection ;)
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As much a ladies man that Roy is, I couldn't make him go back to his always not now that he is getting closer to Lisa.
I know it has taken a while for them to get together, but once the sparkles start to appear everything will be faster... I hope so :P
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Great job. And I can't wait for your next update.
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LOL!!! I keep reminding myself that I should write more about him but keep forgetting to.
It's so good to hear that you think that I'm making Roy and Lisa belong together. Because I think they do :P
Thanks again for beta this for me :)
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Nice work.
Btw,to commemorate this important event, could you make some graphics?
A banner!!!!
with Roy and Lisa!!!
like New Year's Eve!!!!!!
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yes we are!! finally!! it has been a long ride, too long for my own taste but necessary. I couldn't make them jump into bed immediately although I did want to at some point :P
I have really wanted to do a new banner for the LJ but the muse has refuse to come. I just need to find the inspiration... but I have noticed that there aren't much Roy/Lisa scenes in RT to get some screencaps...
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While the idea of Roy being so pissed off is kinda hot, I prefer him being all teddy bear... I think that's because I'm used to Lisa being the Ice Queen, but it's a nice change having them wishing them to rip each other's heads ^^... makes the make up better *winks*
What else? Good thing for Thompson to go to Lisa and apologise; very brave girl too! Knowing you, she'll be around to spice things up and create havoc.
And the make up scene had me crying like a baby!
“You hurt me,”“Of all people, I never thought you would judge me like that,”“Not after what we have gone trough,”I know I'm not perfect, I never pretended to be. I also know that I have made mistakes, but after all the time we spend together? I though you knew me -me, not Captain Fokker. I guess I was mistaken,”“I didn't deserve that. You just assumed I was shagging her, just like any stranger would, but you are my friend. You should have, at least, let me explain.” “I couldn't have survived ( ... )
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I'll update the capter as soon as I have my computer back. The chapter is already done all I need is my laptop and internet conection ;)
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