stael mate...

[joe_x_oblivion]

... and the wind fades to a whisper, the dust clears and the two are left standing only ever so looking desperately at one another, waiting for the next move to be played... he watches but he sees not the reasons only the effects... he knows the moves before they are even played... some he stops, some he cant, he watches as the blades cut in

Comments

[queenfaith]

*stalemate- 1.A position where no other pieces can move and king cannot move without. going into check. 2. A deadlocked situation.

I wish I couldn't understand your powers of representation.
I wish I just didn't understand what any of that meant (though I was lost in some points).
You have a right to feel whatever you want to feel, absolutely... but think about why you would feel/think whatever this means.

My story

[joe_x_oblivion]

Its just a part oh my story, then one i am writing, ppl can think what ever they want, they can feel what ever they want too, who am i to stop them, i am not going to change the way i write because i think ppl will not like it, ppl don't really change the way they are so why should i try?

just a thought in a book i once wrote-josh-

Re: My story

[maliciousanimus]

i rather like it...only if you could spell...but hey thats what editors are for!
but really...you know how i see comic book panels. Good thing i guess!