After The Blues (1/3)

Sep 24, 2014 14:11

Yes, it is the sequal to Blue Veins. Hold your hearts.
Warning: Language. Mild violence. Graphic sexual descriptions. You've been warned.

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checkinyourbra September 24 2014, 12:03:47 UTC
BLESS.

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Well, dayum. I forgot the ~Blue Veins series is an angst-fest. Okay, I didn't forget, but OMG all the feelings came back and now I'm typing like DDDD: 'gawwddd, how're they gonna fix this??'

Their biggest issue, imo, is trust. Jessica lets her physical defenses down, but she knows better than to take every one Tiffany's apologies as sincere. Tiffany still has many ghosts. So, if she wants this to work, she's gotta open up. She should trust that Jessica will still lover her regardless. I mean, she's there, isn't she? That counts for something. :oo

Even their lovemaking has the edge of unhappiness. Everything's so....TIFFANY, OPEN UP TO JESSICA. D;

LOVE this: She can’t hold herself so she lets Tiffany hold her.

I'm ready for the angst ship, Captain Jorgee.

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jorgenzen September 26 2014, 09:08:34 UTC
Hehehe. It cannot be fixed. *cackles* Hehehe. Honestly though.. okay.. I did write this from Jessica's lens. Tiffany is really not a nice person. And I shall not elaborate further in fear of spoiling the story later. :)

I love that line too. (Excuse my proud self) Hehehehe I'll bet it's a short journey. Don't worries. I don't think it'll be angst-filled as Blue Veins. I think. I'm just finishing the story on how it should be. :333

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tffnvhwng September 24 2014, 17:17:55 UTC
omg omg omg i thought everything was fine and rainbow again at the end of blue veins oh nooooo.
so tiffany really did get clean but jessica also went through changes, and both have to face complications from tiffany's past (again), hmm i kinda get jessica's breakdown. pls tell me they will work it out (ugh jeti pls more talk less sex tyvm).

big fan of blue veins, so looking forward for this! fighting!

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jorgenzen September 25 2014, 04:58:24 UTC
I want to say something more about the complications.. but I'm afraid it'll be a spoiler :p

thank you for reading :)

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parachuterawr September 24 2014, 18:27:16 UTC
OMG YASSSSS BRB

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parachuterawr September 25 2014, 10:42:15 UTC
Tbh, I thought they're now off to rainbowland or some sort. But maybe, that's too good to be true judging from Tiffany's past and all.

I really didn't expect this! Also, wow, this is a great surprise. I missed this fic dearly (or maybe I just miss your writings because you write cool things like emotions and feelings and stuff). Blue Veins is one of my favorites.

I hope this one is a good as the previous. Cheers!

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jorgenzen September 25 2014, 13:19:39 UTC
I never intend for Blue Veins to end happily though. But I changed it. Now, I have worked around to make it the way I wanted it. Who knows? Maybe it's the rose or maybe it's just the thorns. Hahaha I have no idea, actually.

I miss the characters. It felt unfinished. In terms of style, I think this one pales compare to BV though. Dk why. Anyway.. thank you for reading :)

Cheers to you too!

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anonymous September 25 2014, 08:55:49 UTC
They are now facing remnants from Tiffany's past. But I guess it's inevitable. Jessica appeared when Tiffany was just starting to be better on her own, it's like going back to drugs.

Throughout the chapter, I can't help but to hold my breath. It's perfectly fine though, angsty and heavy? :)

Anyway, welcome back! :D

- six.

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jorgenzen September 25 2014, 13:15:15 UTC
The past catches up, always. :) (Yeah, with an evil smile) The epilogue of BV was painted with a rosy picture. Or rather, just the surface. Okay, it doesn't make sense.

Always angsty and heavy. These two will never catch a break. Hahah

Glad to be back. :3

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vodkaice9 September 25 2014, 13:01:29 UTC
Welcome back! I didn't expect to see a sequel to Blue Veins! I'm usually not a fan of angsty stories but you write so well I simply loved it. I'm guessing life ain't gonna be a bed of roses (well, it has never been for the main leads). Can't wait to read what magic you have up your sleeves!

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jorgenzen September 25 2014, 13:23:19 UTC
Helloo! :) I didn't expect to write a sequel at all. Just that, it's out of the blue kind of thing. I don't know how I'll fair with this one. Sorry if it disappoints somehow..

Thank you for thinking so. :) Sadism self will be disappointed in a bed of roses. Hahaha. Thank you again. :3

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