Am on a writing break and decided to randomly browse Soshipops for fluff but so happened came to your LJ and so happened clicked on this story (I was lured in by the e.e. cummings in your summary).
I'm glad I did, click on this story. Your writing has a certain delicacy, it reminds me of Japanese tea ceremonies or those paintings of blossoms, delicate strokes, flowers. It has a certain beauty, a measured kind, exactness, but beautiful. I enjoyed your writing.
As for the cancer story, this is the I think 3rd JeTi story I read that had one of the girls die of cancer, a previous one had them making love, very gently on the hospital bed, it was heart-breaking. Such subject matters always do, dying, illness. You handled it well. I also like the use of ocean as a metaphor, I used it recently too but I like how you wrote yours.
Was suppose to find some cheery fluff but I found this, lol but still, I'm glad. Thanks for writing this.
I'm happy that you did. e.e cummings does have that effect on almost everyone. You painted a really pretty picture on the way I wrote here. I don't think I deserve such description. But thank you. I'm glad you did. :)
Cancer story was kind of an iffy plot for me to write. I was afraid that it would end like one of those stories that seemed too forced or sudden or unrealistic. I mainly stay away topics in relation to angst. Because.. would be too long to explain. I tried to be gentle as possible and not solely focus on Tiffany's death. I guess. It was expected of her to die since I think I hinted that in the beginning.
I have never read that one before. Sounds very interesting and sad. Hope you find what you're looking for :)
Comments 6
Reply
thank you. the poem is by e.e cummings.. just to clear things up..
Reply
Reply
Thank you for reading though :) /shy away
Reply
I'm glad I did, click on this story. Your writing has a certain delicacy, it reminds me of Japanese tea ceremonies or those paintings of blossoms, delicate strokes, flowers. It has a certain beauty, a measured kind, exactness, but beautiful. I enjoyed your writing.
As for the cancer story, this is the I think 3rd JeTi story I read that had one of the girls die of cancer, a previous one had them making love, very gently on the hospital bed, it was heart-breaking. Such subject matters always do, dying, illness. You handled it well. I also like the use of ocean as a metaphor, I used it recently too but I like how you wrote yours.
Was suppose to find some cheery fluff but I found this, lol but still, I'm glad. Thanks for writing this.
Reply
Cancer story was kind of an iffy plot for me to write. I was afraid that it would end like one of those stories that seemed too forced or sudden or unrealistic. I mainly stay away topics in relation to angst. Because.. would be too long to explain. I tried to be gentle as possible and not solely focus on Tiffany's death. I guess. It was expected of her to die since I think I hinted that in the beginning.
I have never read that one before. Sounds very interesting and sad.
Hope you find what you're looking for :)
Reply
Leave a comment