This is the first Changmin fic that I've read because I'm ssssoooo Jae-biased. I really like how the idea of the whole prostitute storyline. I think it's extremely difficult to pull off especially since it has some smut but again I really like how you play around with words. These lines particularly sealed the deal and made me want to go on and on with the story:
"I only wanted one thing and one thing only. It was to dance with you for the rest of the night and maybe kiss you at the end. I didn't want you as a woman but what could I do? You chose me and that meant the whole night for me."
Those lines just summed it all up and everything revolved around it until the end.
Wow. I'm looking forward to reading more of your stories soon. Keep it up! :)
it was heartbreaking.. i looked for the lyrics of the song to understand the story better.. prostitution and love can be a sad mix most of the time.. this reminded me of the book eleven minutes by paulo coelho.. i've always loved that book.. good job with this one.. ^_______^
and this: I only wanted one thing and one thing only. It was to dance with you for the rest of the night and maybe kiss you at the end. I didn't want you as a woman but what could I do? You chose me and that meant the whole night for me.
♥♥♥♥ those lines. were everything, this means so much.
And maybe you're right the song dind't fit exactly with the idea but you knew how to play with them and I really like it :3 and the smut escene was good, you don't have to feel sorry about I like it!, It couldn't be very smutty because it was explaining and it had a meaning for them. ♥
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"I only wanted one thing and one thing only. It was to dance with you for the rest of the night and maybe kiss you at the end. I didn't want you as a woman but what could I do? You chose me and that meant the whole night for me."
Those lines just summed it all up and everything revolved around it until the end.
Wow. I'm looking forward to reading more of your stories soon. Keep it up! :)
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and youre happy and youre my reader!
ahhh
thankyouthankyou.
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i looked for the lyrics of the song to understand the story better..
prostitution and love can be a sad mix most of the time..
this reminded me of the book eleven minutes by paulo coelho..
i've always loved that book..
good job with this one..
^_______^
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i love paulo coelho!
=)
and thankyou.
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leo leo leo
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and this:
I only wanted one thing and one thing only. It was to dance with you for the rest of the night and maybe kiss you at the end. I didn't want you as a woman but what could I do? You chose me and that meant the whole night for me.
♥♥♥♥ those lines. were everything, this means so much.
And maybe you're right the song dind't fit exactly with the idea but you knew how to play with them and I really like it :3 and the smut escene was good, you don't have to feel sorry about I like it!, It couldn't be very smutty because it was explaining and it had a meaning for them. ♥
And I like the end gggh kind of sad
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if you want to change it dont mind me!
or if you want to write a follow up, dont mind me. kekeke
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thankyouverymucho.
=))))
my writing is unusual? yay!
Min is so lovable and humane in this story.
he is.
though, am Yoochun bias.
keke
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