The Trouble with Love Chapter 20

Jul 29, 2010 21:59

Auhor: Joy Blue
Title: The Trouble with Love 20/22
Rating: R
Summary: Because sometimes, not all scars can heal with time.
Spoilers: Up to season 9 is fair game
Standard Disclaimers Apply
Warning: Violence, adult situation in future chapters.
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chloe, george dean, the trouble with love, connor, oliver, rating: r

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kryptolori July 29 2010, 13:31:15 UTC
WOW what a fantastic action packed chapter, awesome! best yet for me!

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joyblue July 30 2010, 07:13:07 UTC
thank you, and hope you enjoy the next chapter!

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joyblue July 30 2010, 07:15:02 UTC
I won't say easy... you'll just
have to wait and see what happens next.
Thanks for the comment and looking
forward for more fb convos from you!

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abarbiestory July 29 2010, 16:22:37 UTC
YAY!!! that was beyond exciting!!! I'm glad Bond inspired you!!

although my heart just about broke with the sidekick comment, :( still loved the chapter and can't wait to get more!

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joyblue July 30 2010, 07:17:42 UTC
Thank you, loved that bike scene!
Yes, that Sidekick comment, that was a
last minute addition, I'm glad I added it in!

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abarbiestory July 30 2010, 21:27:41 UTC
good addition for sure!!

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modscho July 29 2010, 17:15:20 UTC
Damn what is it with you and those cliffies? Last time you nearly broke my heart when you let Ollie die and now you have me at the edge of my seat!
It was perfectly written and all those action-scenes were bloody awesome!

They will survive the fall, right? Super strengthy Ollie will safe them! I'm sure ... or at least I hope he will! And then he needs to make up for what he did with Sandra. Chloe deserves more than just an apology!!!

I absolutely love this fic and once you have it finished I'll go over to ff.net to mark it as fave and probably to read it all over again ;)
Please post the other chapters over there as well *pretty please with a cherry on top*

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joyblue August 1 2010, 06:23:10 UTC
You got to love cliffies!

It's going to be finished soon, and when it
does, I'll start posting them in ff.net!

Thanks for the comment and hope you like the last
two chapters!

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saurina July 29 2010, 18:19:51 UTC
That was high fuiled action when it's best! Loved it and want more like noooow. It's so gooood..:D

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joyblue July 30 2010, 07:18:06 UTC
Thank you! and will try to update soon!

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