The Trouble with Love Chapter 20

[joyblue]

Auhor: Joy Blue
Title: The Trouble with Love 20/22
Rating: R
Summary: Because sometimes, not all scars can heal with time.
Spoilers: Up to season 9 is fair game
Standard Disclaimers Apply
Warning: Violence, adult situation in future chapters.
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Raymond coughed up more blood as a steel bar was slammed against his chest

Comments

[anonymous]

omg freaking crazy kick azz story ur a genious bows ..omg i love u plez plez plez update like now! lamo sorry idid comemnt in othere link but u had me hook ur great i love this plez up date soon soon soon thanks
xxoo
rehana
i am one the 10 hehe updat soo

[joyblue]

thanks a bunch, and glad to know you
are one of ten too!

[iluvaqt]

Wow terribly exciting and I like the back story you gave Wong of always feeling underestimated and not acknowledged. Also a neat twist with Oliver's blood. It'll certainly give him a better edge as a hero. Poor guy knew he had an expiration date very soon after starting work for Lex. At least he found a way to be remembered for something good.

Couldn't wipe the smile of my face at the motorcycle chase. Made me think of Gen's dream Chlollie scene and *please no rotten fruit* but the GA & BC comic when they're on the hunt for Connor. I see DC and SV Black Canary as very different incarnations and sometimes I easily picture Chloe as BC in the comics. Chloe/Watchtower and Ollie certainly share the chemistry and history to sell it.

I hope it's the League to the rescue. It's about time that they got there. And hasn't Emil been working on a lead suit? Or is that another fic I'm thinking of. :D

[joyblue]

Thank you! I thought Oliver should come out
with something good atleast! and yes, the league to
the rescue, but no lead suit from Emil!

[ladyhawke01]

Excellent Chapter. Great descriptions of the action. Cannot wait until the next chapter please, pretty please update soon. I cannot wait to see how Oliver and Chloe end up together....I hope.

[joyblue]

Thank you! and will try to update soon!

[sxymami0909]

great chapter! Can't wait for more :-)

[joyblue]

Thank you, and there will be more!

[joyblue]

Hmmmm, a billionaire with a Kevlar fetish...

Well, you'll have to wait and see what happens between
Chloe and Oliver! Thanks for commenting!