The Trouble with Love Chapter 20

[joyblue]

Auhor: Joy Blue
Title: The Trouble with Love 20/22
Rating: R
Summary: Because sometimes, not all scars can heal with time.
Spoilers: Up to season 9 is fair game
Standard Disclaimers Apply
Warning: Violence, adult situation in future chapters.
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Raymond coughed up more blood as a steel bar was slammed against his chest

Comments

[yhrcmg]

Mr. President Luthor is going to be really mad... He just gave his enemy more power! I loved the Michelle Yeoh and Pierce Brosnan moto scene, but the chlollie version is made of awesome.

Waiting for the next chapter (after the near death experiences, I´m sure there is happy Chloe/Oliver ending)

[joyblue]

He'll be pissed! Yep, instead of getting rid
of him, he just became stronger! Thanks for liking the
bike scene, and I promise, no more near death cliffies!
Thanks for reading and commenting!

[purple_moon123]

That was intense and action packed!!!
Can't wait to see what happens and what Lex still has planned for Chloe!!

[joyblue]

LOVE your icon! Sailor Mars fan?
Will try not to keep you guys waiting!
Thanks for the comment and hope you
like what I've got planned next!

[purple_moon123]

Awww thankies!! Love Sailor Mars she was my fave!!! Sailor Moon was my first foray into internet fandom!!!

[mia805]

I loved it. Here is hope for a Chloe and Oliver reunion. Please update soon.

[joyblue]

there will be a reunion don't you worry!
Will try and get the next one by Thursday
the latest! Thanks for the comment!

[theoctober713]

i love this chapter!!! intense from beginning to end... that was funny to read...
and about ollie and his easy "victory" i don't think so... though he never beg for a second chance, or cry, or regret 'cause connor and all that... he doesn't think that he deserves that second chance nor chloe nor her friendship so less her love... maybe he doesn't (he thinks that) regret his actions for connor but he is an alive evidence of all the wrong and he has to live with that everyday (i don't say that he doesn't love him of course)... maybe he has a little solace 'cause chloe love connor like he was family, or maybe that could be painful i don't know... but i don't think that all those years were easy and happy for him. uff, though not much hate for ollie today?
i love the sidekick mention... and i love lex despite his bald and evil head!!! go for her lex!!! you still can win her!!! (too much hope here?)

[joyblue]

are you a mind reader? Because it feels like
you've read my mind! Lol! Thank you for
the comment and hope you like the last chapters
and I'm sorry to say but Lex has no chance! :p

[brittany2922]

Wow! That was amazing!
I love the when he called her sidekick without thinking but it was so sad.
I can't wait for the next update. Soon?

[joyblue]

Thank you! It looks like
the sidekick comment got
a good reaction from you guys!

The last two chapters have been written,
so I just need to look over them and make
adjustments and hoping to put chapter 21 by Thursday the latest!