The Trouble with Love Chapter 9

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In the hospital, Chloe was surprised to see George as he walked in with his partner, and he was just as surprised to see her.

“Mr. Queen? My name is Detective George Dean...”

Oliver nodded. “Yeah, we met a few weeks ago; it’s good to see you again.”

Barry Dune just raised his eyebrows as he looked at George. “And I’m Detective Barry Dune. We

Comments

[xfilefan79]

I don't know why but I just can't seem to make myself like George, I'm not sure why?

Can't wait to see what happens next, and find out more about what Lex is up to.

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Maybe you're just an Ollie supporter? :)
A little bit more on what Lex is up to in
the next chapters!

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There's many ways to make someone suffer! Thanks for reading!
And I am totally hooked on your icon!

[iluvaqt]

Loved it and what did I say about smart?! :D I was a teen and cried watching Outbreak. Connor's brave and observant. I like Dean even more that he respects Chloe's relationships. :) And I'm hopeful considering some of Lex's scientists have a conscience.

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Thank you! and the next chapter has a longer
Chloe/George scene. Needs a little bit of tweaking before
I post it!

[kitmerlot1213]

An awesome update!

The Chlex fan in me is thrilled that Lex seems to want the same amount of revenge on Chloe that he does on Oliver and the other heroes. Lex has always seen Chloe as a worthy adversary and he's always had a grudging respect for her as a reporter, unlike with EDLois who he called a muffin peddling college drop out--Sorry, my Chlex bias is showing :):)

And Lois was killing me with the George/Chloe/Oliver set up. George does seem like a good cop and I have no doubt that he genuinely wants to help Connor and Oliver.

Continued excellent work with this fic :):)

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With icons like yours, the Chlex in me is trying to resurface!
I love Chlex, and there was such an opportunity for them,
even if they don't become a couple, because you're right, he did see her as a worthy adversary.

Thank you, and hope you like what I have in store for Lex and Chloe!

[sxymami0909]

Oh boy...Lex is a bad bad man hehe I love it! :-) Great chapter!!! Woot more please soon??? Oh no wai that should say more soon please hahah :-D

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Thank you! will try to post something on Monday. I will
most likely be awake to watch Australia vs Germany at 4 AM
so I'll see how it goes!

If Australia looses or draws, I'll post one chapter. If they win,
I'll post two!