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White Collar Fic: Like Air

Dec 22, 2010 21:55

Title: Like Air (White Collar Fic)
Author: J. Rosemary Moss
Genre: White Collar; OT3, asexual Neal
Pairing: Peter-Elizabeth-Neal
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: Alas, I don't own White Collar or the characters
Summary: Peter wants to fix something that's not broken . . .(This story is a response to an LJ Collar Kink prompt. I've prettied it up and reposted ( Read more... )

white collar, peter-elizabeth-neal, one shot, fan fiction

Comments 31

phate_phoenix December 23 2010, 03:54:18 UTC

Wow, this is a really lovely story. ♥ I'm a huge fan of ace!Neal fics, and this is an absolute treat.

I love that Peter doesn't just get it, because Peter is human and asexuality is practically unknown in the ~real world~, and that Neal is offended by that. However, I also love that Peter understands his error and fixes it. :D

And Neal's POV section really captures that sort of feeling that I get when I think about my future and what sort of relationships I'll have. If I'll ever find someone who'll respect my desires, or work with me, compromise their needs with mine. I really felt for him, and it makes me glad that El and Peter are there for him.

So, um, yeah. XD Sorry for the motormouth, but I really loved this fic. :D

jrosemary December 23 2010, 05:04:32 UTC

Please don't apologize! Thank you so much for such a lovely, heartfelt review. I'm so glad that this story rang true and that Peter didn't come across as a bad guy. (A little clueless, yeah. But he only wants the best for Neal! His heart is in the right place.)

rabidchild December 23 2010, 04:07:12 UTC

I love this so much. Like, um, air...*shifty eyes*

But srsly, the interactions are so sweet and tender. Peter is so blundering but well-meaning. Neal is so...earnest? Wanting to meet him halfway? IDK.

If you write a sequel, I will send you hugs and cherries.

jrosemary December 23 2010, 05:05:51 UTC

Thank you so much! Lol--"blundering but well-meaning" is a great description of Peter here. But he kinda figures out how to handle this by the end.

I want the hugs and cherries, so I will write a sequel! ;)

theras December 23 2010, 06:21:46 UTC

I loved this!

jrosemary December 23 2010, 13:19:44 UTC

Thank you!

micheleeeex December 23 2010, 06:34:20 UTC

i love this!

jrosemary December 23 2010, 13:19:55 UTC

Thank you!

daria234 December 23 2010, 07:59:09 UTC

great fic of them - I love that Neal wants to make sure they see what was real, not just their assumptions about him or about Kate

jrosemary December 23 2010, 13:32:44 UTC

Thanks so much, Daria! (Of course, in canon, I have my doubts about Kate. But not about how Neal felt about her.)