White Collar Fic: Like Air

Dec 22, 2010 21:55

Title: Like Air (White Collar Fic)
Author: J. Rosemary Moss
Genre: White Collar; OT3, asexual Neal
Pairing: Peter-Elizabeth-Neal
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: Alas, I don't own White Collar or the characters
Summary: Peter wants to fix something that's not broken . . .(This story is a response to an LJ Collar Kink prompt. I've prettied it up and reposted ( Read more... )

white collar, peter-elizabeth-neal, one shot, fan fiction

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sahiya December 23 2010, 08:00:59 UTC
This was great - a very interesting take on Neal.

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jrosemary December 23 2010, 13:32:58 UTC
Thank you, Sahiya!

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sw0rdy December 23 2010, 08:24:14 UTC
Really enjoyed this! Will definitely be keeping a look out for more of your fics.

~Swordy x

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jrosemary December 23 2010, 13:33:25 UTC
Thank you very much! I'm glad you enjoyed this.

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misura December 23 2010, 09:31:30 UTC
Loved this - especially the way you get the feeling Peter earnestly tries to figure Neal out, not just because he worries about Neal pulling something, but (also?) because he genuinely cares about Neal as a person.

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jrosemary December 23 2010, 13:34:14 UTC
Thanks so much Misura! That's one of the things I love about the show--the fact that these two so genuinely care for each other.

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elrhiarhodan December 23 2010, 16:31:45 UTC
There are so many things I love about this, I fear that I'll just end up quoting the whole story back to you ( ... )

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jrosemary December 27 2010, 17:58:15 UTC
Thank you for such lovely, detailed feedback, Elrhiarhodan! I'm glad you picked up on Peter's imperfections; I was trying hard to resist perfect, all-knowing Peter! And, yeah, Neal was smart enough not to storm off permanently. He knows he has to stick around to teach Peter!

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ext_186374 December 23 2010, 19:08:49 UTC
What everyone else said. *g* And, thank you.

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jrosemary December 27 2010, 17:59:34 UTC
Aw! Thanks again, Dragonfly!

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