Twenty-One Days: the last day and epilogue

[ju4jen]

Day One Hundred and Twenty-three : Where we catch up with our hero some months after the events of our tale.Jared stopped off at the Co-op to pick up bread and bacon.  He chatted to Maureen at the till and then was caught by Mr. Gibson who wanted an ear in which to complain about the latest antics of the Porth Hellick twins, then a brief chat with

Comments

[trishabooms]

That was so wonderfully romantic and I loved it to bits, hence the fact that it's two in the morning.

The story was simple but perfect, the settings were wonderfully described and, refreshingly, the sex was sweet and laid out for me to imagine and not described in clinical detail.

I really enjoyed this, thank you for sharing!

[ju4jen]

Thank you for your very kind words.

I have a very busy life but want to write much more. Comments like this one help motivate me to find the time. :)

[readerj]

This a lovely, romantic story. Enough drama to keep us clicking through but not so much that it takes away from who the characters are.
I really enjoyed your original characters (not something you see much of in this fandom), specially Uncle.
You've made me want to visit the Scilly Islands, so I guess the Duchy was right to use Jensen, and I haven't even seen the pictures yet ;)

[ju4jen]

I think we need to get Jensen right to that (perhaps after he's finished filming season 11? I am happy to be his personal guide.....

Thank you for your kind comments :) j x

[lapdogdesign]

I loved this! As I'm currently on my own search for whatever my passion is, imagining a life of travel or maybe a life in Europe someday (even as I currently raise two kids in America as a single mom) - this story and Jared and Jensen's similar journey really spoke to me. I will be bookmarking this one to read again. Beautifully written and evocative.

[ju4jen]

Oh, thank you so much for these lovely comments. I hope you find your dreams and they come true for you whatever they prove to be, :) j x

[oldbatj]

I want to aplogize for leaving only a SINGLE comment but once I started your delicious tale it sunk its teeth deeply into me and pulled me (quite happily i must admit) through all of the chapters....All since this early morning

[ju4jen]

I feel extraordinarily moved and humbled by your lovely comment on my fic. Thank you so much.

Every time I put a story up for people to read I am always very nervous and it feels a bit cheeky to subject people to what is, in effect, a hobby I barely get time to indulge in. However, I love writing so much, even when I struggle to find the words (you should see the mess I have got myself in with the next project!!), that I really appreciate any positive or constructive comments.

I'm glad you enjoyed 'Twenty-One Days', but thank you even more for your very kind comments. :) J xx

[whiteted]

This was a beautifully written fic with wonderful descriptive passages.

[ju4jen]

I am really glad you enjoyed reading. Thank you for taking the time to comment :) j x