A new Percy story

[julu543]

This is a little missing moment from Chamber of Secrets with Arthur and Percy from Arthur's perspective. I was inspired by the way Mandrakes are used in other works of literature and their historical mythological connotations. I hope it is enjoyable and that a few Percy-fans might find it

Comments

Te Aroha

[anonymous]

This is awesome and so funny! (bits of it, anyway...) I loved how uncomfortable Arthur was, and also dumbledore's thoughts on butterflies. "A bit over-eager if you ask me." Perfect for Percy.
:)

Re: Te Aroha

[julu543]

Oh thank you so much for reading! I'm glad you thought it had a bit of humor. I hope the humor came out of their characterizations and personalities. I can't help but love them both!

[yakshaver]

This is a lovely little story, and makes Percey a little more human. I've always felt that JKR made it too easy for us to just dismiss him as a prat. Nicely done. I did find one possible mistake: unless you're deliberately using the obsolete "state, condition" definition (def. 4 in the OED), I don't think "stature" is the word you want when describing Penelope in the hospital; "posture" might be a better choice.

(In case you're wondering why someone is commenting on this so long after you posted it: I'm new to HP fan fiction, having only started reading it after I finished Deathly Hallows and realized I wasn't ready to leave that universe behind yet; I found this story via a link from stmargarets.)

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[anonymous]

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