Comments | jumping_down: For blue, blue skies

jumping_down

For blue, blue skies

Oct 31, 2008 05:01

collision course series, steven gerrard, harry kewell, fiction, stephen finnan, xabi alonso, fernando torres, daniel agger

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hoppipolla October 30 2008, 21:15:03 UTC

I just want to say, that even though I have commented a lot lately, I still love this story and I'm sad it's ending but it's been a fun ride and I can't wait to see what else you have in store. ♥

jumping_down October 30 2008, 21:58:30 UTC

Bb, I've missed you! o.o Too many people have been disappearing from the fandom, it's getting sad.

Thanks for reading the story, regardless. And hopefully you'll like whatever I'll come up with next. ♥

hoppipolla October 31 2008, 03:13:09 UTC

I know *clings* I haven't been around the Liverpool slash fandom in ages.

I'm sure I will. You know I love your writing.

jumping_down October 31 2008, 05:49:45 UTC

Don't disappear completely on us! We will miss you and your good slash. D:

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jumping_down October 30 2008, 21:58:56 UTC

Aw, thanks, bb. And it was my pleasure (and also, source of pain) to write this!

lust_demolition October 30 2008, 21:56:26 UTC

what? really?
334 hours and 53 minutes of total editing time
do you like use stopwatch for that?

love it tho.
all of it
from 1 to 13b
<3

jumping_down October 30 2008, 21:57:13 UTC

Yeah, you can check the total editing time on the properties off MS Word. XP

iamyourmind October 30 2008, 22:08:36 UTC

♥ One of the best AU's I have ever read and I am kind of sad it's over! The way you build and build and build up tension is absolutely fantastic :-) The last scene with Stevie and Xabi had me almost in tears, I am so happy they are at least trying! And it's nice to see how Fernando and Daniel are still, kind of, the same as in the beginning of the story. With the text messages and all <3
Plus, Finns and Harry are ULTIMATE LOVE!!
Thanks so much for writing this, I've had a great team reading and I can't wait for your next story!

jumping_down October 30 2008, 22:35:48 UTC

APSIDASDIAPO. I really have nothing to say. I didn't want to start writing an AU because I didn't know how, but I'm glad you liked it. Your compliments have essentially made me a puddle of goo. ♥

iamyourmind October 30 2008, 23:20:37 UTC

Aw, you deserve all of the compliments you get :D

bluethursdays October 30 2008, 22:13:16 UTC

AM DYING.

I can't believe this is over. I can't. I'm going to be rereading this over and over for ages to come. It's been such a great ride!

Dan didn’t miss the way Fernando’s body tensed beneath his hands, and in a few more sucks, Fernando came deep in his throat. The striker sank to his knees after he emptied his load, crumpling down on the floor next to Daniel, leaning tiredly against the Dane’s strong chest. Daniel instinctively wrapped an arm around his shuddering body and held him close.

“Can I keep you?” Fernando murmured against the fabric of Dan’s shirt. It was a small, meek question, but Daniel couldn’t come up with the right answer. So, he looked away instead and hoped that his fierce embrace around Fernando could somehow be enough.

“Right,” the Spaniard said to himself disconsolately. He moved to disentangle himself from Daniel, pulling up his briefs and zipping up his pants listlessly. He kept his head down the entire time - Dan knew Fernando was ashamed, broken or near tears even. And he didn’t want to show it.That. ( ... )

jumping_down October 30 2008, 22:37:36 UTC

Noooo. I can't believe this is over too! It's kind of like missing a leg. Like, I've always relied on the fact that I had this fic with me, and now I have to think of NEW THINGS. *gasps* Fail.

ASDPOIASDIAODIAI. You didn't think it was cheesy? *pumps fist in the air* Haha, but yes, anything for angry, moody, hurtful, pseudo-comfort sexual tension!

(And hihihi, before I posted, yes, I thought of including the title in the dialogue. I am made of fail. XP)

ILY BB. ♥

bluethursdays October 30 2008, 22:58:54 UTC

NEW THINGS. YES. I SAY YES TO MANY NEW THINGS. *waits patiently for new things*

NOT CHEESY AT ALL. SO LOVELY AND STEVIE AND XABI JUST KIND OF BROKE MY HEART. I WANT TO PSUEDO!FIGHT WITH A BOY IN THE RAIN AND SMACK HIM WITH AN UMBRELLAAAA.

Argh, how do you do it?

(I love it when the titles are incorporated into the story. I fail at doing it, but whatever. XD)

♥ ♥ ♥

jumping_down October 31 2008, 06:00:20 UTC

ME TOO OKAY. I want to have dramaz in the rain, I will not be content until my relationship is Stevie/Xabi level of fluff, okay.

*shrugs* I don't know, it started raining here really bad and I always got drenched, it was so frustrating. I thought I had to force one of my characters to live through my pains. XP

(I had to incorporate the title just to justify why it was the title - because I don't remember why I chose it. XP)

NEW THINGS, I NEED NEW THINGS! My brain is emptyyy.

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