the air, then

[just_below]

there it is, there it was, and there it goes
racing by as it pulls to and fro
[stop and go]

corner-glances at a pseudo-beret and a coffee cup in hand,
a sideways glance at a near-missed encounter
[and yet a dove folded just for you]
impromptu, in the modern style
[the way you like it]and the heart goes pidder-pat with anticipation

Comments

[just_below]

oh, i am; it's just not a secret anymore. =)

~*~

[myid8myego]

I like this; esp. the last 6 lines.

[just_below]

thank you, very much so.

~*~

[lacunatheif]

i get lost,
but sometimes i stumble upon beauty in unexpected places.

[just_below]

maybe someday you'll see what i mean, then. miss you.

~*~

[blanketofsighs]

I keep trying to type out my reaction, but everything I say sounds cheesy. So anyway, I really enjoyed this. Glad you shared. You're very good at pulling someone into the experience. It's always fun borrowing your eyes.

[concordiadiscor]

Hi sweetie. I'm not sure if you remember me..it's been a while, but I remember you and that I enjoyed reading your journal immensely. I've been convinced to start writing here by a friend, and wanted to invite you over to my new journal:

http://www.livejournal.com/users/nindada/

I hope you've been well.

Ciao,

*Candice

[just_below]

I do wuite remember you; I am glad that you remember me.

Thank you for the invite, thank you for reminding me how much I need to write again, and I look forward to seeing your work.

~*~