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"No."
"Comments like that going to cause you trouble?"
"Depends."
"On what?"
"On how stupid Valdez and Benden are. If they think Bunka's talking out his ass, no problems, if not, time to polish the resume again."
"Again?"
"Look Gibbs, I don't know what it's like in the military, but out
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More will be forthcoming. Next chapter, we finally get some of the base details about this possible serial killer. ~.^
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I'm committing fanfic cliche no. 1, I know, but at least it's a new option for dad... ~.^
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Giggles evilly becasue I know what is coming.
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Wonderful. Tony refering to his dad as "Father" was.. creepy. But in my world that's not an actually used word, ya know? Course, I still call my dad Daddy...
I like that the captain guy is just kinda.. passing the buck. I'm still worried he's going to cause trouble. Him and Tony's partner. Gibbs and Jim better keep an eye on them. And squish them!
Poor Ducky. On one hand, I totally like how you have him sticking his foot in his mouth. I adore him, really, but it sometimes seems like he gets away with things because people write him off as the cute little English man. So having someone take him to task, even in a subtle way or however you want to describe it, is pretty awesome. BTW, a small part of me hopes you do the same with Abby... for similar reasons.
On the other hand, stop threatening Ducky! Or at least make sure Gibbs doesn't catch you.
I can't wait to see what happens next. Thanks for sharing, happy writing, and update soon please!
Tabee :)
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Who, me... ::innocent look version 1.00.1™::
Bunka, in particular, started out as a throw away character (the obligatory partner that Tony needed because you don't have law enforcement running around without backup). OC's that want to be more than just placeholders can be annoying but Bunka's going to be about for a while causing trouble.
I'm glad you like so far and I hope I don't disappoint later. JJ
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