NCIS/TS Fic: The Cost of Divorce 3/?

Jul 24, 2009 22:46

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"No."

"Comments like that going to cause you trouble?"

"Depends."

"On what?"

"On how stupid Valdez and Benden are. If they think Bunka's talking out his ass, no problems, if not, time to polish the resume again."

"Again?"

"Look Gibbs, I don't know what it's like in the military, but out ( Read more... )

gibbs/dinozzo, cost of divorce, wip, jim/blair, the sentinel, crossover, ncis

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ignescent July 24 2009, 15:28:52 UTC
*chants* moremoremoreshinymore! I /love/ this fic. I was always fond of good sentinel fiction, and have only recently been seduced into the wonderful world of NCIS - together, they are /awesome/! This is very well done, and you've got the voice of Ducky dead on, and I love the interactions between everybody. /Please/ keep writing. :D

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Thanks justjeanette July 24 2009, 23:11:06 UTC
There is more to come, have no fear. ~.^

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guess19 July 24 2009, 15:50:02 UTC
Ok, you have me well and truly hooked. More please?

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Thank you. justjeanette July 24 2009, 23:14:22 UTC
Here fishy, fishy....

More will be forthcoming. Next chapter, we finally get some of the base details about this possible serial killer. ~.^

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crossgate_teri July 25 2009, 01:31:20 UTC
Ducky knew a Miss Sandburg? *Grin* and Part of Jim feels the need to protect Ducky? *Big Grin* Blair and Ducky are both short *Very Big Grin* Both men are smarter than than the average bear as well. :D Are we possibly looking at one of Naomi's potential candidates for Blair's Dad? Hope so. Just go easy on Ducky, he appreciates Blair's papers and he is my favorite NCIS character. I look forward to seeing where you go next.

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Evil Grin ™ justjeanette July 25 2009, 04:28:02 UTC
Ducky won't be hurt. I promise.

I'm committing fanfic cliche no. 1, I know, but at least it's a new option for dad... ~.^

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heavenreturned July 25 2009, 01:35:18 UTC
ACK!! Ducky I so love Ducky!! But JIM!! OMG!! I cannot wait for more of this!!

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justjeanette July 25 2009, 04:30:24 UTC
Thank you...

Giggles evilly becasue I know what is coming.

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novalinx July 25 2009, 02:13:58 UTC
Yay! Update!

Wonderful. Tony refering to his dad as "Father" was.. creepy. But in my world that's not an actually used word, ya know? Course, I still call my dad Daddy...

I like that the captain guy is just kinda.. passing the buck. I'm still worried he's going to cause trouble. Him and Tony's partner. Gibbs and Jim better keep an eye on them. And squish them!

Poor Ducky. On one hand, I totally like how you have him sticking his foot in his mouth. I adore him, really, but it sometimes seems like he gets away with things because people write him off as the cute little English man. So having someone take him to task, even in a subtle way or however you want to describe it, is pretty awesome. BTW, a small part of me hopes you do the same with Abby... for similar reasons.

On the other hand, stop threatening Ducky! Or at least make sure Gibbs doesn't catch you.

I can't wait to see what happens next. Thanks for sharing, happy writing, and update soon please!

Tabee :)

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Thanks justjeanette July 25 2009, 04:33:57 UTC
BTW, a small part of me hopes you do the same with Abby... for similar reasons

Who, me... ::innocent look version 1.00.1™::

Bunka, in particular, started out as a throw away character (the obligatory partner that Tony needed because you don't have law enforcement running around without backup). OC's that want to be more than just placeholders can be annoying but Bunka's going to be about for a while causing trouble.

I'm glad you like so far and I hope I don't disappoint later. JJ

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