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justjeanette

NCIS/TS Fic: The Cost of Divorce 4/?

Jul 31, 2009 10:06

Given Bunka had poured scorn on the idea that this shooting might be part of a serial, Sandburg decided to use the time during the walk back to the house on Lovegood Street to question the Baltimore detective about his suspicions. After all, Bunka wasn't here, so hopefully Tony would feel more comfortable discussing his suspicions. Also, if ( Read more... )

gibbs/dinozzo, cost of divorce, wip, jim/blair, the sentinel, crossover, ncis

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sabina1956 July 31 2009, 03:38:33 UTC

I am really enjoying this series. So far you've delightfully combined my all time 3 favs.

Looking forward to more.

Sabina

Thank you justjeanette July 31 2009, 04:16:35 UTC

Jason Gideon wanted to make a slight Cameo. I hope you continue enjoyinh the rest of the story.
JJ

maekala July 31 2009, 04:14:57 UTC

First, typo spotting: "What. . . happened?" Blair growled, and Ducky took a step back, shaken by the glow? In Sandberg's eyes.

Second, I love the little Criminal Minds addition. I about doubled over laughing when you mentioned Gideon. I love the interplay between everyone and the way you're playing who knows? with the Sentinel thing. Can't wait for the next part.

Poot..... justjeanette July 31 2009, 04:28:55 UTC

Still it took a lot of words to get to a typo I'd missed... Fixing now.

Glad you are enjoying this and I hope I continue to keep you entertained.

JJ

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justjeanette July 31 2009, 09:51:33 UTC

Lip reading; Blair is still speaking, just in a very low voice not knowing that Gibbs is happily (or otherwise) reading his lips.

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justjeanette July 31 2009, 12:27:42 UTC

Gibbs or Tony as a Sentinel tends to be the reason for crossing NCIS with the Sentinel, I thought I'd try something a little different. Evil Grin™

ANyway Gibbs doesn't need to be a sentinel to be dangerous :D

As for what happens next; stay turned for next weeks epi-chapter...

vis: The discussion that could be heard wasn't a discussion at all; it was the tail end of a short, but vicious, fight.

Gibbs had driven to the Baltimore PD at his normal breakneck speed parking with ease in front of the PD's doors. Luck might have had something to do with the ease with which Gibbs was able to park but Gibbs being Gibbs it may well have been an examples of the Universe, using all the sense nature had provided, aligning the stars so that as Gibbs drove down East Fayette Street a police cruiser pulled out leaving that free parking space right in from of the PD's doors. Even Universes' could have a sense of self-preservation.

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ladyivy July 31 2009, 09:28:11 UTC

This is a wonderful story. I am truly enjoying seeing this develop and I look forward to more chapters.

justjeanette July 31 2009, 09:53:47 UTC

More to come; I'll be updating weekly. Looks like about another 5-6 chapters. I hope you contune to enjoy. I know I'm having fun writing this group of characters.

Thank you justjeanette July 31 2009, 12:28:39 UTC

Case details coming next week... Then the fun really starts. :D

I hope you continue to enjoy.

rogue_psion2 July 31 2009, 10:56:00 UTC

I am loving this story so far and eagerly await the next part. :) What happened in Chicago? It sounds interesting too.

Another crossocver ~.^ justjeanette July 31 2009, 12:24:21 UTC

That crossover is in the works....

Sentinel/Due South anyone?

I'll finish that one once I've gotten this one DONE!!! I'm trying to close off my WIPs... wish me luck.