I CAN SEE CLEARLY NOW, PART 9 / 12

[kachelofen]

Comments

[lazy_8s]

I so love your Justin voice, as you capture a mature, but emotionally vulnerable man who is deeply in love with someone who seems his exact opposite. 'pets him' Kudos to Justin for speaking with Michael, as he knew that was a relationship that Brian would regret losing in the future. However, I do feel that the continued physical relationship with Jon is a mistake, as he seems to be falling for Justin. But, Justin is beginning to regrat that, as well.

Anyway, loved the update. I'm looking forward to see what Brian does with the information that Michael has relayed. Will he show up at the loft for a confrontation? Or, will that take place after the treatment. I'll be waiting with bated breath. :)

[kachelofen]

Yes, I think Justin does agree with you about Jon. But he is/was in a bad place, so maybe wanting a little comfort is excusable. He is emotionally vulnerable and was so even before the cancer happened. Brian is enough to wear anyone down, no matter how mature Justin is. :-)

Thank you. More soon.

[likeamilkyway]

this was sooo sad...i cried in the end...you have just the perfect way to describe all these feelings and emotions.
i can´t wait to read the next chapter and hope that brian comes back to justin to be there for him!!!

[kachelofen]

That's a lovely thing to say. I'm glad Justin's feelings came over as genuine. We'll see how Brian reacts in the next chapter.

Thank you.

[erdmut1]

please say that the raised voices in the other room occurred because Brian barged in, refused to leave and then chased everyone else out... and that next chapter we will finally get back to the love?!

[kachelofen]

Lol. That sounds just like something Brian would do, go there and start an argument. :-)

Thank you.

[love4movies]

Actually, I was hoping for something along this way, too. In canon Justin refuses to leave sick!Brian. So...
Can't wait for the next chapter!

[armandyouidiot]

That was very a very sad chapter. I kept hoping Brian would some how turn up !

[kachelofen]

I think Justin is with you on that one. :-)

Thank you.

[itzy68]

Oh... I just want to hug Justin. I missed Brian himself in this chapter but I guess that's your way of torturing us ;) Great chapter I'm so looking forward to the rest.

[kachelofen]

You're right, the only interaction between them was the break-up and we already knew that. But the next chapter is all Brian. :-)

Thank you.