OMG, I fucking love it! I love two things: rescue!fics and trope reversals. This combines both of them and I am positively squealing here. ♥ ♥ ♥ This is so bloody perfect. There HAS to be a sequel for this, right? Right? :) I want the blatant manipulation to continue.
I am so glad you liked it!!!!. I really want to write a sequel if nothing else then to give the slave a name. I can't stand to write about people who don't have names but no name popped into my head when writing him and if I keep looking at baby names online I'm going to give my family too much false hope.
Great story! I love the manipulative slave! He is perfectly that! I love where you stopped also. It's enough to keep the reader's imagination ticking away.
I wanted to leave enough of an ending so it wasn't a cliffhanger but like you said give enough for the reader's imagination but also I hate to close a door on characters incase I want to go back and write more about them so I feel I can still do that as well.
Thank you I have always hated reading 1st person stories until I started reading stuff on this site and I really enjoy them now. But it was still hard to actually write one myself.
I'm not sure if the master is as clueless as the slave would like although to be honest I was so focused on the slave's POV that I havn't given much thought to the master's backstory or personality or anything like that.
I love this slave so much :). I love that he's smart and resourceful and doesn't romanticize any of the situation. Nice job on the first person POV, too! It came across great.
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Thank you so so very much.
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Well done!! :)
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I'm not sure if the master is as clueless as the slave would like although to be honest I was so focused on the slave's POV that I havn't given much thought to the master's backstory or personality or anything like that.
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