[Dong Bang Shin Ki] A Man Who Wasn't There [4/?]

[kai_yukashi]

Chapter 4

If only there were evil people somewhere insidiously committing evil deeds, and it were necessary only to separate them from the rest of us and destroy them. But the line dividing good and evil cuts through the heart of every human being, and who is willing to destroy his own heart?
            - Alexander Solzhensitsvn

Comments

[smellsliketheta]

I love your description of Yoochun and Junsu because thats exactly how I tend to think of them XD Yoochun likes beautiful, pleasing, warm things and Junsu isn't pretty; he's cute. :D I also really liked the piano connection between them. I love your yoosu :D

the man was prettier than most girls he had seen hahahahah heechul &hearts how true..kinda sad but very true.

Now I want to find out who is on the other side of the door T_T Good luck to you, Yunho! :D

[houshi_sama0991]

Ohhhh, the plot thickens!!!! It just gets better and better in each chapter! XD Awwww JunSu is so cute~ And YooChun amuses me so much! XDD Can't wait to see them progress and JaeHo too XD God I can't wait for more!!!!!

Update soon~ ♥

[joyciel]

The suspense!! *sways* Where did Jaejoong go o.o? Lol Yoochun's an assman..XD then he'll LOVE Junsu XD!!! Great chapter...now I really want to read the next one *bounces*~

[geleeober]

yay, new chapter. so puting all the pieces, that i know, together. The victim started going to that club and he got too close the JJ, which made the murdered mad, and a reason to kill him. also i think Changmin is hurt because he was tring to protect JJ from the murderer.
Also, i'm loving Yoosu. How Yoochun admired Junsu, that was classic. i love your story so much. I just can't wait to find out, not read, the murderer.

[fuu_luv_tofu]

YooSu is getting a long well~~ I actually enjoy Yoochun's personality in this one, I think in your fic is the one that best describes Yoochun...In other ficcies I have read not many people have had this view of Yoochun before...

haha Yoochun is an ass-man~~ well who wouldn't be in love with Junsu's awesome ass? even if he is straight Su's ass just got to have his attention~~

seeing Yoochun's on the piano eh? I bet Su was too amazed at Yoochun's piano skills to actually yell at him to get off of the piano~~
hm...I wonder if Junsu likes music too...?

There is no man named Kim Jaejoong? so does this mean he is one of the customer who enters the shop? for a second there I almost thought that Jae was behind that wooden floor...

This man is leading Yunho to a secret room eh?
hm, I wonder who that is?

can't wait for JaeHo to talk and definitely can't wait for your next update!!!! I awaits your next update~!!!!

^_~