[Dong Bang Shin Ki] A Man Who Wasn't There [4/?]

[kai_yukashi]

Chapter 4

If only there were evil people somewhere insidiously committing evil deeds, and it were necessary only to separate them from the rest of us and destroy them. But the line dividing good and evil cuts through the heart of every human being, and who is willing to destroy his own heart?
            - Alexander Solzhensitsvn

Comments

[sharkbait_ha]

Wow!
This fic is so suspenseful~

And the Yoosu interaction was the best xD
I love your Yoochun :DD

[shuwei]

*choke*
Ok, so I should have expected that you will use cliffhangers.

The Yoosu was LOVE. They're in character and I adore how you contrast them by describing their living space (the part about family photos <3)

And Yunho's part...is inching very slowly *breathes* No wonder I rarely read mysteries. I can't deal with the suspense >_> I alway NEEDED to know what's going on.

It took several minutes before he realized that the man who slipped his arm through Yunho's and started leading him
...Kangin? LOL, "leading"? Linking arms? Is the Owner looking for skinship? XD

[orionsroad]

Aha!!! *flails* XD XD YAY. I really really enjoy this fic - it keeps pulling out new questions, and intrigues me greatly. As I think I've said before, I really enjoy your characterisations. The way you set Yoochun up in this chapter was really nicely done... I like the effect of him being so enraptured by the piano that he forgets everything and doesn't notice Junsu, despite his obvious high observation skills.

Yunho's part was really intriguing, with this mysterious club, no Jae and an unknown 'owner'. I'm really looking forward to the next part to see what is revealed. ^_^

[crosssdx]

omg....that was sooooo mystersiouly amazing... I'm sooo awestruck by your writing style....~!!! O_O"
It's soooooo amazingly well written in every way and I don't think I can ever get enough of this story...until it's done...but it's not right now. I can't wait for the next chapter.
So, Yoochun went into the music room, next to the washroom. A grand piano in a small music rooom...hmm...sounds familiar.. (my music room). And Yunho sleeps in a room with a lock on the door or does he share a room with Junsu-ahh?
Anyway...love the humour break between Junsu-ahh and Yoochun about, 'Are you his loveR?' That made me laugh like crazy...hehehehe
Like I said before, I can't wait for the next chapter~!!! =3

[vrilly]

hi, i absolutely love your story. keep it all coming. and yes, the descriptions of junsu and yoochun are really great.