[Dong Bang Shin Ki] A Man Who Wasn't There [5/?]

[kai_yukashi]

Chapter 5

Men occassionally stumble over the truth, but most of them pick themselves up and hurry on as if nothing had happened.

- Winston Churchill

"Jung Yunho-sshi, I presume," a silky, but definitely male, voice murmured by Yunho's left ear.  The slim arm that threaded itself around Yunho's seemed overly

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[tumi18]

my spot.. be back after work :x

[tumi18]

back...

yunho showing his protective side <333
i love the jaeho interaction.. like yunho wanting to believe jaejoong and jaejoong seemed clueless of his situation right now... the tension! ^^

"I know someone who used to sing,"
hmmm.. was that junsu??? i wonder what happened...

"Isn't this the first time Uknow-sshi and Youngwong met?"
hmm interesting... cos in the 1st chapter jaejoong wondered if him and yunho met before.. now leeteuk asking that... and he called yunho u-know...

so what happened to yoosu?? *pokes* ^^

china! i always wanted to go there.. well.. have fun there and will miss you and your fic!..

btw... i m guessing either changmin or junki the killer.. why?? dont know that just popped out my mind XD

[shienri]

Me first?

[shienri]

Noooooooo! Second!! T^T But that was a good chapter ~<3

Have fun in China ^ ^

[xiaobai7988]

:o! You're going China? Are you going to stay there for long? Cause if you are, you might be able to catch DBSK's asia tour concert~ :D (and there's quite alot of DBSK stuff in China as well :) )

Anyway, I'm abit upset that you won't be updating sooner...this is a brilliant chapter! 8D Though I kinda pity Yunho at some parts cause he's so confused. ^^;;

As for the killer...well..........now that there are new characters...^^;; I'm still wondering if I should stick with the guess that Changmin is the killer. It's definitely not that simple, right? :D (I love plot twists, no matter how 'ouch' they sometimes are XD)

:) Do take care in China! And I hope that you'll update soon! ^_^

[oncloud999]

hmmm, this chapter was really enjoyable. =) i have to say, so far, i enjoy the Jaeho interaction a tinsy bit more than the Yoosu... XD maybe it's cos the Jaeho tension is sooo good. XD

but the last paragraph just left me wondering a little... but it's nice to see that Yunho is very obviously developing feelings for jaejoong. =D

have fun in China meanwhile and can't wait for the next chapter when you come back!

[rainbowpebbles]

you're going to CHINA!? T________T now soloscry has left and you're leaving...what am i going to do!??? gaah! @__@

anyway. oh my gosh. you really caught me with the last bit. why did leeteuk address yunho as U-know? that and jaejoong's secrecy...and changmin the psycho? (sorry, i know he didn't appear in this chapter but i just felt i had to add that in ^-^)

and you're updating NEXT MONTH!?

*rolls around on the floor*

haha (: i hope that your fic writing goes well in china (when you have the time)! and do take care ^-^ i shall stalk the comm (even more than usual) come early July XDDD