[Dong Bang Shin Ki] A Man Who Wasn't There [5/?]

May 21, 2007 01:32



Chapter 5

Men occassionally stumble over the truth, but most of them pick themselves up and hurry on as if nothing had happened.

- Winston Churchill

"Jung Yunho-sshi, I presume," a silky, but definitely male, voice murmured by Yunho's left ear.  The slim arm that threaded itself around Yunho's seemed overly ( Read more... )

dong bang shin ki, fanfic, wasn't there, jaeho, horror, yoosu, mystery

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zerotrigeal May 21 2007, 12:38:36 UTC
Aaaaaa...
You are soo good at letting people guessss >< but I barely have anyone in my mind as the murderer but JaeJoong himself!! <3<3<3<3<3

Jung Yunho, special homicide investigator of Seoul Police Homicide Department, was long out of hearing range when Leeteuk, the waiter, asked in confusion, "Isn't this the first time Uknow-sshi and Youngwong met?"

This last line really confuses me alot! And this is also the trigger for me to point out JaeJoong as the murderer!! hahaha... simple isn't it.

addition : Do all of the SuJu members work at Shion Club? hehehe... I've found three in total work there... HeeChul, KangIn and the last appearance LeeTeuk. Is there more??? Aiih.. I really want to read the next, but you'll update the next month. It's a looooong time. but, hey, enjoy your trip or whatever it is in China!! <3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3

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uknowandiknow May 21 2007, 13:04:57 UTC
im so sorry that i've been reading your story for five chapters and havent been commenting! *whacks self*

ok, to sum up my comments for the past 5 chapters: L-O-V-E

i LOVE the mystery and suspense of everything
i LOVE the interaction between yoosu and jaeho
AND! you left for china with that cliff hanger!!

why did yunho become uknow?!?!

ok, enjoy yourself in china, prays hard for updates. =)

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rabu_meevs May 21 2007, 21:39:10 UTC
SO GOOD! absolutely SUSPENSFUL! XD

Yunho

Uknow XD

i wonder if Yunho used to work tehre....or something @_@ XD
this is sooo good, and i would loove to know why Junsu quit singing ^__^
great story, awesome chapter. update soon~

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fuu_luv_tofu May 22 2007, 00:00:41 UTC
you updated!!!! and wow. that gotta be one of the most awesome chapter I have ever read from you...

interesting...so now the mystery between Jaejoong's job is solve, so this mean Jaejoong was buying medicine for Changmin right? that was a twist on the job...never expected the job to be so cleanheheh...Junki~ that was the person whom I imagine for Junki is the only who would be able to best Jaejoong in looks ( ... )

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joyciel May 22 2007, 00:24:39 UTC
Dun Dun Dun DUUUUN now the last line is going to drive me crazy...=S How does Leeteuk know Yunho and why did he call him Uknow...the questions!!! *sways* You are very good at keeping a suspenseful atmosphere in the story o.o I really want to read the next chapter but....you are going to China for a month and can't update D=...well hope you have fun ^_^!

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