[Dong Bang Shin Ki] A Man Who Wasn't There [5/?]

[kai_yukashi]

Chapter 5

Men occassionally stumble over the truth, but most of them pick themselves up and hurry on as if nothing had happened.

- Winston Churchill

"Jung Yunho-sshi, I presume," a silky, but definitely male, voice murmured by Yunho's left ear.  The slim arm that threaded itself around Yunho's seemed overly

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[guilty_amethyst]

UWA! THAT WAS AWESOME.

But also confusing. That last line really confused me and caused a bunch of speculation on my part. Yunho probably has some sort of reputation but isn't exactly involved in the hosting business? Because he seemed unfamiliar with the rules of Club Shion Which, btw, reminded me of Club Sion in Viewfinder xD. GAH. FDJKSLGHDFJKSL. I WANNA SEE MORE.

No Yoosu? ;______; Ooh. I'm interested now in Junsu's story. <3

I SEE THE JAEHO MOMENT! In which Yunho already feels somewhat attached/jealous of/angry at anybody who touched Jaejoong in an inappropriate manner.

The detective was mildly unnerved; somehow it felt like the man knew exactly what Yunho was going to do and it made the investigator a little uncomfortable at being so closely watched, and so easily predicted.
METHINKS IT'S KANGIN. :D
Well, actually, idk. YOU MADE ME SUSPECT EVERYONE.

;_____; Counting the days down until July. ><;;

[houshi_sama0991]

YAY! AN UPDATE!! *in love* I seriously love the plot and fic ♥

"No!" he blurted out, snapping his eyes back to Yunho. "It's not like that, there's nothing shifty on the other side!"
The knot in Yunho's chest loosened just a bit.
"There are only private rooms in the back."
The knot turned into a chokehold and suddenly Yunho couldn't breath.
I'm sorry, but I did find it amusing how that came out... Jae saying 'no' and YunHo thinkning 'Oh, that's good' then Jae making it sound worse XD

"Isn't this the first time Uknow-sshi and Youngwong met?"
Or is it?! It was in the first chapter that it mentioned that they did look familiar to one another XD And LeeTeuk did say 'Uknow-sshi'! This is just getting better and better in each chapter!

JunSu used to sing but stopped?! WHY?!?! *shocked* You'd have been excellent JunSu! Why did you stop?! T__T Speaking of JunSu... How are YooSu getting along now?

Update soon~ ♥

[houshi_sama0991]

Oh! I forgot to mention who I suspect... Now the ones to me that are suspicious to me are Lee JunKi and KangIn. So my guess it's one of them! 8D But y'know I could be wrong... It could be someone who's NOT suspicious and acts normal like LeeTeuk! 8D; But I don't think it's him!

[shuwei]

*DIES* Well hello Jaeho cliffy that will drive me insane.
Oh gosh, I knew the jealously and the obsession isn't because of love at first sight. And U-Know?? And Lee Junki all being weird on him?? (I adore your description of LJK btw. He's like the king of smugness. When I read that he smirked, I can totally imagine it.) Obviously Yunho have some ties with that club.
The detective looked down into his drink. Why didn't he ask? Yunho was suddenly confused as well
I see a gap in his memory! But then if it's amnesia then Jaejoong would have a gap as well and that's some perfect coincidence. Or maybe it's a disease??? My imagination is getting wild O___O

The murderer...I have this gut feeling that Junsu is really involved in the murder but I can't point a finger at him for some reason. All I can narrow it down to is the club, which is pretty much LJK or at least he's the mastermind behind it.

[kuro_jashin]

Okay, firstly, I love you. XD This story is beyond amazing and it's always exciting to see an update. ^^ I hope you have fun in China and I'll be awaiting your next update. ^^

Secondly, I'm probably way off base here, but I first thought the killer was Junki when I started reading this chapter. However (and this is where I'm probably waaaay off base, or watch too many psycho thrillers) when I got to the end of this chapter, I started to think that Yunho is the killer. @_@ I'm crazy, aren't I? It would explain his migraines (he has a split personality!), his Obsessive-Complusive Disorder, his perfection in the workforce (being the TOP cop type thing), and why he never questioned Junsu. (He seems like a caring person who normally would and now, maybe that's why...he wasn't "himself" at that time). Yeah. I think I'm crazy. XD

Oh! I can't wait for more of the Yoosu interactions. I totally LOVED that chapter. ^^ I can't wait to see how this entire case gets solved, especially about UKnow and Youngwong. XD

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[crosssdx]

whoa!!!!!! =O
That was intense..and all that....possessive-ness coming out and showing its self...!!! amazing!!! Great chapter...can't wait for the next one!! =]
Do update soon...and what about those two people in Yunho-oppa's house? what about them???? O_O
I'm soo happy and excited for your story! =3